IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die.

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Đề bài

Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better lime to be alive than now.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

284 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

In the last 100 years, science, technology and other parts of society have developed a lot. These changes have changed the way we live and helped people to live longer. Some people believe that there is no better time to be alive than now. I mostly agree with this opinion.

Firstly, people today live much longer and healthier lives than in the past. Thanks to modern medicine, many diseases that killed millions of people in the past, such as smallpox and polio, can now be prevented or cured. Hospitals have modern equipment, and doctors can do difficult operations. As a result, life expectancy in many countries is now over 75 years.

Secondly, technology has made our lives easier and more comfortable. We have machines such as washing machines and refrigerators that help us with housework. We can travel to other countries quickly by plane, and we can talk to people all over the world through the Internet and smartphones. In addition, more people can go to school and university today, and women have more rights and opportunities than in the past.

However, modern life also has some problems. There is a lot of pollution, and climate change is becoming a serious danger to the world. Many people also feel stressed because of work and busy lifestyles. In some countries, there are still wars and poverty.

In my opinion, although there are still some problems, life today is better than at any time in the past for most people.

In conclusion, I agree that now is the best time to be alive, because science and technology have made our lives longer, healthier and more comfortable, even though we still face problems like pollution and stress.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

282 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Over the past century, advances in science, technology and social organisation have transformed human life and significantly increased life expectancy. While I acknowledge that modern life has its challenges, I largely agree that there has never been a better time to be alive.

The most compelling evidence comes from improvements in health. Vaccines, antibiotics and modern surgical techniques have eliminated or controlled many diseases that were once fatal, and global life expectancy has more than doubled since the early twentieth century. Child mortality has fallen dramatically, and conditions such as diabetes and heart disease, which were once untreatable, can now be managed effectively.

Beyond health, living standards have improved considerably. Technology has made everyday life more comfortable and convenient, from household appliances to instant global communication through the Internet. Access to education has expanded enormously, and global literacy rates are higher than ever before. In many societies, people also enjoy greater rights and freedoms than previous generations, including improved rights for women and minority groups.

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