IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: The 21st century has begun.

Đồng ý / không đồng ý 40 phút · tối thiểu 250 từ Bài mẫu 6.0 Bài mẫu 7.0 Bài mẫu 9.0 trong app

Đề bài

The 21st century has begun. What changes do you think this new century
will bring?

Use examples and details in your answer.

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Đề hỏi bạn đồng ý đến mức nào (To what extent do you agree or disagree?). Bạn phải nêu quan điểm rõ ngay mở bài và giữ nhất quán đến kết bài.

  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

288 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

The 21st century has brought many changes to our lives, and I believe there will be even more changes in the coming years. In my opinion, the most important changes will be in technology, health and the environment.

Firstly, technology will continue to change the way we live and work. Today, smartphones, the internet and artificial intelligence are already part of our daily lives. In the future, robots and computers will do many jobs that people do now, such as driving, cooking and working in factories. For example, self-driving cars are already being tested in some countries, and in the future, they may replace taxi drivers. People will also be able to work and study from home more easily by using the internet.

Secondly, there will be big changes in healthcare. Scientists are developing new medicines and treatments for serious diseases such as cancer and Alzheimer's disease. Doctors will be able to use technology to find diseases early and give each patient the right treatment. As a result, people will live longer and healthier lives. However, this means that there will be more old people in society, so governments will need to take care of them.

Thirdly, the environment will be one of the biggest challenges of this century. Climate change is causing more extreme weather, such as floods, droughts and storms. I believe that people will change the way they use energy. For example, more countries will use solar and wind power instead of coal and oil, and more people will drive electric cars.

In conclusion, I believe that the 21st century will bring many changes, especially in technology, healthcare and the environment. Some changes will make our lives better, but we will also face new challenges.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

299 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Although we are already well into the twenty-first century, many of the most significant changes it will bring are still unfolding. In my view, the most important transformations will occur in three areas: technology and work, health and longevity, and the way we produce and use energy.

The first major change will be driven by technology, particularly artificial intelligence and automation. Intelligent machines are already capable of translating languages, diagnosing certain diseases and driving vehicles, and their capabilities will continue to expand. This will transform the nature of work: many routine jobs in manufacturing, transport and administration are likely to disappear, while new roles in fields such as data science and robotics will emerge. As a result, people will need to keep learning new skills throughout their lives, and education systems will have to adapt accordingly.

Secondly, advances in medicine are likely to extend human life significantly. Developments in genetic research, personalised medicine and early diagnosis using artificial intelligence could make it possible to treat or even cure diseases that are currently fatal. However, longer lifespans, combined with falling birth rates, will lead to ageing populations in many countries, creating challenges for pension systems, healthcare and the labour market.

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