IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: All education, primary, secondary and further education, should be free to all people and paid for by the government.

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All education, primary, secondary and further education, should be free to all people and paid for by the government.

Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

306 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people believe that all levels of education, including primary, secondary and university education, should be free for everyone and paid for by the government. I partly agree with this statement. I think primary and secondary education should be free, but university education should not be completely free.

On the one hand, I strongly agree that primary and secondary education should be free. Basic education is a right for every child, whether they are rich or poor. Children need to learn to read, write and do mathematics to have a good life in the future. If schools are not free, many poor families cannot afford to send their children to school, and these children will have fewer opportunities. In addition, educated people help the country to develop, because they can get better jobs, pay more taxes and contribute to society.

On the other hand, I do not think that university education should be completely free. Firstly, university education is very expensive, and if the government pays for everyone, it will need a lot of money. This money may come from higher taxes or from cutting spending on other important areas, such as healthcare. Secondly, university graduates usually earn more money than other people, so it is fair that they pay part of the cost of their education. Thirdly, if university is free, some students may not take their studies seriously, because they do not have to pay anything.

In my opinion, the government should pay for primary and secondary education, but for university education, students should pay part of the fees. However, the government should give scholarships and loans to poor students, so that everyone who is talented can go to university.

In conclusion, I agree that primary and secondary education should be free, but I disagree that university education should be completely free for everyone.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

314 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Some people argue that education at every level, from primary school to university, should be provided free of charge and funded entirely by the government. While I strongly agree that primary and secondary education should be free for all, I believe that university students should contribute to the cost of their education, with financial support available for those who need it.

There are compelling reasons why primary and secondary education should be free. Basic education is widely recognised as a fundamental human right, and it equips children with the literacy, numeracy and social skills they need to participate fully in society. If families had to pay school fees, children from poorer backgrounds would be excluded, perpetuating poverty from one generation to the next. Moreover, a well-educated population benefits the whole country by creating a skilled workforce, promoting economic growth and reducing crime and social problems. For these reasons, almost all developed countries provide free schooling.

However, the case for completely free higher education is weaker. Firstly, university education is extremely expensive, and funding it entirely from taxation would place a heavy burden on public finances, possibly at the expense of other essential services such as healthcare or primary education. Secondly, university graduates generally earn significantly more over their lifetimes than non-graduates, so it seems fair that they should contribute to the cost of an education from which they personally benefit. Thirdly, free tuition may disproportionately benefit students from wealthier families, who are more likely to attend university in the first place.

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