IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Television has destroyed communication among friends and family.

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Đề bài

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Television has destroyed communication among friends and family.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

293 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people believe that television has destroyed communication among friends and family members. I partly agree with this statement, because television can reduce conversation, but I do not think it has completely destroyed communication.

On the one hand, television can have a negative effect on communication. Firstly, when people watch TV, they usually focus on the screen and do not talk to each other. In many families, people eat dinner in front of the TV, so they do not talk about their day. For example, in my neighbour's house, the TV is always on during meals, and the family members rarely talk to each other. Secondly, some people spend many hours every day watching TV, so they have less time to visit friends or do activities with their family. Thirdly, family members may argue about which programme to watch, especially if there is only one TV in the house.

On the other hand, I do not think television has destroyed communication completely. In fact, television can sometimes help people to communicate. Firstly, watching TV together can be a family activity. For example, my family often watches football matches or films together at the weekend, and we talk about them and have fun. Secondly, TV programmes give people interesting topics to talk about. Friends often discuss popular TV shows, news or sports events when they meet. Thirdly, nowadays smartphones and the internet have a much bigger effect on communication than television.

In my opinion, the problem is not television itself but how people use it. If families limit their TV time and turn it off during meals, they can still communicate well.

In conclusion, I partly agree that television can reduce communication, but I disagree that it has destroyed communication among friends and family.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

304 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

It is often claimed that television has destroyed communication between friends and family members. While I accept that excessive television viewing can reduce meaningful interaction, I disagree that it has destroyed communication, as television can also bring people together and stimulate conversation.

There is some truth in the claim that television harms communication. When the television is on, people's attention is directed towards the screen rather than towards each other, and conversation is often limited or interrupted. In many households, families eat their meals in front of the television, missing an important opportunity to talk about their day and share their thoughts. In addition, people who spend several hours every evening watching programmes have less time for social activities, such as visiting friends, playing games or going out together. Some studies have also suggested that children who watch a lot of television develop weaker communication skills.

However, I believe it is an exaggeration to say that television has destroyed communication. Watching television together can be a shared experience that strengthens relationships. Many families, including my own, enjoy watching films or major sporting events together, cheering, laughing and discussing what they have seen. Television also provides common topics of conversation: popular series, news stories and documentaries frequently spark discussions among friends and colleagues. Furthermore, in recent years, smartphones and social media have arguably had a far greater impact on face-to-face communication than television, as people now often look at their own screens even when sitting together.

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