IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: We all work or will work in our jobs with many different kinds of

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Đề bài

We all work or will work in our jobs with many different kinds of
people.

In your opinion, what are some important characteristics of a co-worker (someone
you work closely with)?

Use reasons and specific examples to explain why these characteristics are
important.

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
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  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
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  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

294 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

In our working life, we work with many different people, and our co-workers have a big influence on how happy and successful we are at work. In my opinion, the most important characteristics of a good co-worker are reliability, good communication skills and a positive attitude.

Firstly, a good co-worker should be reliable. When people work closely together, they depend on each other to finish their tasks on time. If one person is lazy or always late, the whole team will have problems. For example, in my last job, one of my colleagues often did not finish his part of the project on time, so the rest of the team had to work late to finish it. This made everyone stressed and angry. A reliable co-worker always does what he or she promises, so other people can trust them.

Secondly, a good co-worker should have good communication skills. They should share information clearly, listen to other people's ideas and ask questions when they do not understand something. Good communication helps to avoid misunderstandings and mistakes. For example, if a colleague tells you about changes to a project early, you can plan your work better.

Thirdly, a good co-worker should have a positive attitude. Work can be stressful, and there are often problems and difficulties. A co-worker who is friendly, helpful and positive makes the working environment more pleasant. For example, when I started my first job, one of my colleagues helped me to learn the job and encouraged me when I made mistakes. This made me feel more confident.

In conclusion, I believe that the most important characteristics of a co-worker are reliability, good communication skills and a positive attitude, because they help the team to work well together and make work more enjoyable.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

301 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Most of us spend a large part of our lives working alongside other people, and the qualities of our co-workers can greatly affect both our productivity and our job satisfaction. In my opinion, the most important characteristics of a good co-worker are reliability, effective communication and a cooperative attitude.

The first and perhaps most essential quality is reliability. In any team, members depend on one another to complete their tasks accurately and on time. When one person fails to meet deadlines or does careless work, others must compensate, which causes delays, stress and resentment. For example, in a previous job, I worked on a marketing project in which one team member repeatedly submitted his reports late, forcing the rest of us to work overtime before the client presentation. By contrast, a reliable colleague, who consistently does what they promise, builds trust and allows the team to function smoothly.

Secondly, effective communication is vital. Good co-workers share relevant information promptly, express their ideas clearly and listen carefully to others. This reduces misunderstandings and helps the team to solve problems more efficiently. A colleague who informs others early about a potential problem, rather than hiding it, enables the team to find a solution before it becomes serious.

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