IELTS Writing Task 2 · Two-part question

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: You have decided to give several hours of your time each month to

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Đề bài

You have decided to give several hours of your time each month to
improve the community where you live.

What is one thing you will do to improve your community? Why?

Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

296 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

If I decided to spend several hours every month helping my community, I would give free English lessons to children from poor families. In this essay, I will explain why I chose this activity.

Firstly, English is very important for young people in my country. Today, many good jobs require English, especially in international companies, tourism and technology. Students who speak English well can also apply for scholarships to study abroad. However, many children from poor families cannot afford to go to English centres, because the fees are very expensive. As a result, they have fewer opportunities than children from rich families. By teaching them for free, I can help them to have a better future.

Secondly, I have the right skills to do this. I have studied English for many years, and I have a good level. I also enjoy working with children. When I was at university, I helped my younger cousin with her English homework, and she improved a lot. So, I believe I can teach children in my community effectively.

Thirdly, this activity can have a long-term effect on the whole community. If children learn English well, they can get better jobs in the future and help their families to escape poverty. They may also come back and help other children in the community. In addition, learning English can make children more confident and open-minded.

To do this, I would ask the local community centre to let me use a room on weekend mornings. I would also ask my friends to join me and donate books.

In conclusion, I would give free English lessons to poor children in my community, because English is very useful, I have the right skills, and it can help to improve the future of the whole community.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

318 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

If I were to dedicate several hours each month to improving my community, I would offer free English classes to children from low-income families. I believe this would be the most effective way for me to make a lasting difference, for three main reasons.

The first reason is the importance of English for young people's future prospects. In Vietnam, English proficiency has become a key requirement for many well-paid jobs, particularly in international business, tourism and information technology, and it is also essential for students hoping to win scholarships abroad. However, private English centres are expensive, and many families in my neighbourhood simply cannot afford them. As a result, children from poorer backgrounds start their adult lives at a disadvantage. Free classes would help to narrow this gap.

The second reason is that this activity matches my own skills and interests. I have studied English for many years and use it regularly in my work, and I enjoy helping young learners. While I was at university, I volunteered as a tutor at a local primary school, and I found it extremely rewarding to see the children's confidence grow as their English improved. Choosing an activity that I am good at and enjoy would also make it easier for me to commit to it in the long term.

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