IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Supermarkets should only sell food produced from within their own country rather than imports from overseas.

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Supermarkets should only sell food produced from within their own country rather than imports from overseas.

What are your opinions on this?

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

287 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people think that supermarkets should only sell food that is produced in their own country, and they should not sell imported food. In my opinion, I disagree with this idea, although buying local food has some advantages.

On the one hand, there are some benefits of selling only local food. Firstly, it helps local farmers and the economy of the country. When people buy local food, the money stays in the country, and farmers can earn more and keep their jobs. Secondly, local food is usually fresher, because it does not need to travel a long distance. Thirdly, it is better for the environment, because transporting food by plane or ship produces a lot of pollution.

On the other hand, I think that only selling local food would cause many problems. Firstly, many countries cannot grow all kinds of food because of their climate. For example, countries in Europe cannot grow tropical fruits like bananas, mangoes or coffee. If supermarkets only sell local food, people will not be able to buy these products. Secondly, imported food gives people more choices and helps them to have a healthy and varied diet. Thirdly, some countries depend on exporting food to earn money. If other countries stop buying their food, farmers in these countries will become poorer. Moreover, if there is a bad harvest in a country, people may not have enough food without imports.

In my opinion, supermarkets should sell both local and imported food, but they should encourage people to buy local products when possible.

In conclusion, although selling local food has some advantages, I disagree that supermarkets should only sell food from their own country, because imported food gives people more choice and helps other countries.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

294 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

It has been suggested that supermarkets should sell only food produced in their own country, rather than imported products. While I recognise the benefits of supporting local agriculture, I believe that restricting supermarkets in this way would be both impractical and undesirable.

There are certainly some advantages to prioritising local food. Buying domestic produce supports local farmers and food producers, helping to protect rural jobs and strengthen the national economy. Local food also tends to be fresher, as it spends less time in transit, and it may have a smaller carbon footprint, since it does not need to be transported across long distances by air or sea. In addition, relying less on imports could make a country less vulnerable to disruptions in global supply chains, as seen during the Covid-19 pandemic.

However, a complete ban on imported food would have serious disadvantages. Most countries are unable to produce all the food their populations need, either because of their climate or because of limited agricultural land. For instance, coffee, tea, bananas and many spices cannot be grown in northern Europe, so people would lose access to these products entirely. Such a policy would also reduce competition, which could lead to higher prices and less choice for consumers. Furthermore, many developing countries depend heavily on food exports, and restricting trade would harm their economies and the livelihoods of millions of farmers. It is also worth noting that local food is not always more environmentally friendly; for example, vegetables grown in heated greenhouses can produce more emissions than those imported from warmer countries.

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