IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Some people think that it is important to have a single language as an international official language.

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Đề bài

Some people think that it is important to have a single language as an international official language. Others think that it will make it difficult to identify countries and cause a loss of culture.

What are your opinions on this?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
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  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
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  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

289 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people believe that the world should have one official international language, while others think that this will make countries less different and cause a loss of culture. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my own opinion.

On the one hand, having a single international language has many advantages. Firstly, it makes communication between people from different countries much easier. For example, business people, tourists and scientists could talk to each other without needing a translator. Secondly, it would help international cooperation, because governments and organisations could understand each other clearly, so there would be fewer misunderstandings. Thirdly, students could study in any country and find information more easily. Nowadays, English is already used as an international language in many areas, such as business, science and the internet.

On the other hand, some people are worried that a single international language may cause problems. Language is an important part of a country's culture and identity. If everyone uses the same language, people, especially young people, may stop using their own language. As a result, some languages may disappear, and with them, traditional songs, stories and customs. In fact, many small languages in the world are already disappearing. Moreover, countries might become too similar, and the world would lose its cultural variety.

In my opinion, it is useful to have one international language for communication, but people should also keep their own language. For example, people can learn English as a second language for work and travel, but they should still speak their mother tongue at home and learn about their own culture at school.

In conclusion, a single international language can help communication, but we must protect local languages and cultures at the same time.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

299 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

While some people believe that adopting a single international language would bring significant benefits, others fear that it would undermine national identity and lead to the loss of cultural heritage. In my view, a common international language is highly useful, but it should be used alongside, rather than instead of, national languages.

The advantages of a shared global language are considerable. It would make communication between people of different nationalities far simpler, which would benefit international trade, tourism, diplomacy and scientific cooperation. Misunderstandings caused by translation errors could be reduced, and the cost of interpreting and translating documents would fall. Students and workers would also find it easier to study and work abroad. To some extent, English already plays this role, as it is widely used in business, aviation, academic research and on the internet.

However, the concerns about cultural loss are also valid. Language is closely connected to identity, history and traditions, and it shapes the way people think and express themselves. Many literary works, songs, proverbs and jokes cannot be fully translated into another language. If a single language became dominant, younger generations might lose interest in their native languages, and minority languages could disappear entirely. Linguists estimate that a large proportion of the world's languages are already endangered, and each one that disappears takes with it a unique way of understanding the world.

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