IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Some people say the government should not put money into building theatres and sports stadiums; they should spend more money on medical care and education.

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Some people say the government should not put money into building theatres and sports stadiums; they should spend more money on medical care and education.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

301 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people believe that governments should not spend money on building theatres and sports stadiums, and should spend more on healthcare and education instead. I partly agree with this opinion, because healthcare and education are more important, but I think theatres and stadiums are also useful for society.

On the one hand, it is clear that healthcare and education should be the top priorities for governments. Good healthcare saves lives and helps people to live longer and healthier lives. In many countries, hospitals are overcrowded, and there are not enough doctors, nurses and medicines. Education is also very important, because it gives young people knowledge and skills to find good jobs and helps the country to develop. For example, many schools in poor areas do not have enough teachers, books or computers. Therefore, governments should spend more money on these areas.

On the other hand, I believe that theatres and sports stadiums are also important. Firstly, sports facilities encourage people to do exercise, which keeps them healthy. If people are healthy, they will not need to go to hospital so often, so the government can save money on healthcare. Secondly, theatres help to protect and develop a country's culture and give people a place to relax and enjoy themselves. Thirdly, stadiums and theatres can attract tourists and create jobs. For example, when a country hosts a big sports event such as the Olympic Games or the World Cup, many tourists come, which brings a lot of money.

In my opinion, governments should spend most of their money on healthcare and education, but they should also spend some money on theatres and sports facilities.

In conclusion, I partly agree with this opinion. Healthcare and education are the most important, but culture and sport are also necessary for a happy and healthy society.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

300 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Some people argue that governments should stop investing in theatres and sports stadiums and instead focus their spending on healthcare and education. While I agree that healthcare and education should be the top priorities, I believe that cultural and sporting facilities also deserve a share of public funding.

There are strong reasons why healthcare and education should receive the majority of government spending. Access to good medical care is a basic human need, and in many countries, hospitals face shortages of staff, beds and equipment, resulting in long waiting times and preventable deaths. Similarly, education is the foundation of a country's future prosperity, as it provides citizens with the skills needed to find employment, contribute to the economy and participate in society. Underfunded schools with overcrowded classrooms and poorly paid teachers cannot achieve this. Given that public money is limited, it seems reasonable to prioritise services that directly affect people's lives and opportunities.

However, it would be a mistake to eliminate spending on theatres and sports facilities altogether. Sports facilities encourage people to stay active, which reduces the risk of obesity, heart disease and other health problems, thereby reducing pressure on the healthcare system. Theatres and other cultural venues enrich people's lives, preserve national heritage and give young people opportunities to develop creative talents. In addition, such facilities can bring economic benefits by attracting tourists, hosting major events and creating jobs. Many cities have been revitalised by the construction of cultural centres or stadiums.

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