IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Companies should encourage employees who work in a high position to leave at the age of 55 in order to give opportunities to the new generation.

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Companies should encourage employees who work in a high position to leave at the age of 55 in order to give opportunities to the new generation.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
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Bài mẫu band 6.0

308 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people think that companies should encourage employees in senior positions to leave at the age of 55, so that young people can have more opportunities. I disagree with this opinion, although I understand why some people support it.

On the one hand, there are some reasons to support this idea. Firstly, if older managers leave their jobs, younger employees can be promoted, which will motivate them to work harder. Many young people feel frustrated because they cannot get a higher position for many years. Secondly, young people often have new ideas and are good at using new technology, so they can help the company to change and develop. Thirdly, there are many young people who cannot find a job, so if older people retire earlier, there will be more jobs for them.

On the other hand, I believe that forcing people to leave at 55 is not a good idea. Firstly, people at the age of 55 usually have a lot of experience and knowledge, which is very valuable for the company. For example, an experienced manager knows how to deal with difficult problems and customers, and young people can learn a lot from them. If they leave, the company will lose this knowledge. Secondly, people today live longer and stay healthy for longer, so many people at 55 can still work very well for many more years. Thirdly, many people need to keep working to earn money for their family and their retirement. It would be unfair to make them leave just because of their age.

In my opinion, companies should judge employees by their ability and performance, not by their age. Older and younger employees can work together and learn from each other.

In conclusion, I disagree that senior employees should be encouraged to leave at 55, because their experience is very valuable for companies.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

311 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

It has been suggested that companies should encourage senior employees to retire at the age of 55 in order to create opportunities for younger people. Although I recognise the importance of supporting the next generation, I largely disagree with this proposal.

There are some arguments in favour of this policy. In many organisations, a lack of senior vacancies means that talented young employees must wait many years for promotion, which can lead to frustration and cause them to leave for other companies. Encouraging older managers to retire earlier would open up leadership positions and help to retain ambitious staff. In addition, younger leaders may bring fresh ideas, greater familiarity with new technologies and a willingness to take risks, which could help companies to innovate and remain competitive.

However, I believe the disadvantages of this approach are more significant. Employees in senior positions at the age of 55 typically have decades of experience, extensive professional networks and a deep understanding of their industry. This knowledge is extremely difficult to replace, and losing it could harm the company's performance. Moreover, with people now living longer and remaining healthy well into their sixties and seventies, many 55-year-olds are at the peak of their abilities. Encouraging them to leave would also be a form of age discrimination, which is illegal in many countries, and it could cause financial difficulties for those who are not yet ready to retire. Finally, with ageing populations, many governments are actually raising the retirement age to address labour shortages and pension costs.

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