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Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside.

Nguyên nhân / vấn đề và giải pháp 40 phút · tối thiểu 250 từ Bài mẫu 6.0 Bài mẫu 7.0 Bài mẫu 9.0 trong app

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Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

308 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Many big cities have serious problems with traffic and housing. Some people think that these problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their workers to the countryside. I partly agree with this idea, because it can help to reduce some problems, but it also has some disadvantages.

On the one hand, moving companies and factories to the countryside can help big cities. Firstly, if many companies move out, there will be fewer people travelling to work in the city every day, so there will be fewer traffic jams. Secondly, when fewer people live in the city, the demand for housing will go down, so house prices and rents will become cheaper. Thirdly, factories cause a lot of pollution, so moving them out of cities will make the air in cities cleaner. Moreover, moving companies to the countryside can create jobs for people in rural areas, so they do not have to move to cities to find work.

On the other hand, this idea has some problems. Firstly, many employees may not want to move to the countryside, because their families, friends and children's schools are in the city. Secondly, the countryside often does not have good roads, hospitals, schools and other services, so the government would need to spend a lot of money to build them. Thirdly, factories may pollute the countryside and destroy farmland and natural areas. In addition, some companies need to be in cities, because they need to be close to their customers and other businesses.

In my opinion, moving some factories and companies to the countryside can help, but it cannot solve all the problems. Governments should also improve public transport and build more affordable housing in cities.

In conclusion, I partly agree that moving companies to the countryside could reduce traffic and housing problems, but other solutions are also needed.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

316 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Many major cities suffer from severe traffic congestion and a shortage of affordable housing. Some people suggest that relocating large companies and factories, together with their employees, to rural areas would solve these problems. While I agree that this approach could ease some pressures on cities, I do not believe that it would be a complete solution.

There are clear benefits to relocating businesses away from crowded cities. If large employers moved to the countryside, the number of people commuting into city centres every day would fall, which would reduce traffic congestion and pollution. Lower demand for housing in cities could also help to make homes more affordable for those who remain. At the same time, rural areas, which often suffer from unemployment and population decline, would benefit from new jobs and investment, helping to revive local economies and reduce the pressure on young people to migrate to cities.

However, this policy also has serious limitations. Firstly, many employees would be unwilling to relocate, as their families, social networks and children's schools are based in the city. Companies might therefore lose experienced staff. Secondly, rural areas generally lack the infrastructure needed to support large workforces, including transport links, housing, hospitals and schools, and building these facilities would be extremely expensive. Thirdly, moving factories to the countryside could simply shift pollution and congestion to new areas, damaging farmland and natural environments. Finally, many businesses, particularly in finance and services, depend on being close to clients, suppliers and other companies, which is one of the main advantages of city locations.

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