IELTS Writing Task 2 · Two-part question

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: As the world becomes technologically advanced, computers are replacing more and more jobs.

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As the world becomes technologically advanced, computers are replacing more and more jobs.

Describe some job positions that may be lost because of computers, and discuss at least one problem that may result.

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

307 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

As technology develops, computers are doing more and more jobs that people used to do. In this essay, I will describe some jobs that may disappear because of computers and discuss some problems that this may cause.

Firstly, many office jobs may be lost. In the past, companies needed many secretaries, typists and clerks to write letters, keep records and do calculations. Now, computers can do these tasks quickly and accurately, so companies need fewer office workers. Secondly, jobs in shops and banks are also disappearing. For example, many supermarkets now have self-checkout machines, and people can do their banking online or use ATMs instead of talking to bank staff. Thirdly, factory workers are being replaced by computer-controlled robots, which can work 24 hours a day without getting tired. In the future, even drivers may lose their jobs because of self-driving cars and trucks. Some jobs like translators and customer service workers are also being replaced by computer programs and artificial intelligence.

This change may cause several problems. The biggest problem is unemployment. When people lose their jobs, they have no income, so they cannot pay for food, housing and their children's education. This can lead to poverty and stress, and in some cases, it can increase crime. Many workers, especially older people, find it difficult to learn new skills and find new jobs. Another problem is that the gap between rich and poor may become bigger, because companies that use computers earn more money, while ordinary workers lose their jobs.

To solve these problems, governments should provide training courses so that workers can learn new skills, such as computer skills, and find new jobs.

In conclusion, computers may replace many jobs, such as office workers, cashiers, factory workers and drivers. This can cause unemployment and inequality, so governments need to help workers adapt to the changes.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

310 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

As technology continues to advance, computers and automated systems are taking over an increasing number of tasks previously performed by human workers. This essay will describe several types of jobs that are at risk and discuss the main problem that this trend may cause.

A wide range of occupations are vulnerable to computerisation. Routine clerical jobs, such as data entry, bookkeeping and filing, have already declined significantly, since software can process information far more quickly and accurately than humans. In the retail and banking sectors, self-service checkouts, online shopping and internet banking have reduced the need for cashiers and bank clerks. Manufacturing has also been transformed, with computer-controlled robots now performing assembly-line tasks in industries such as car production. Looking ahead, developments in artificial intelligence threaten jobs that were once thought to be safe, including drivers, as self-driving vehicles are developed, as well as call-centre staff, translators and even some roles in law and journalism.

The most serious problem that may result is large-scale unemployment, particularly among low-skilled and middle-aged workers. When people lose their jobs, they face not only financial hardship but also a loss of self-esteem and purpose, which can lead to depression and family problems. Many displaced workers find it difficult to retrain for new roles, especially in technology-related fields, which require skills they do not have. As a result, there is a risk that society will become increasingly divided between highly skilled, well-paid workers and those left with insecure, low-paid jobs or no work at all. This growing inequality could lead to social unrest.

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