IELTS Writing Task 2 · Two-part question

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Families who do not send their children to government-financed schools should not be required to pay taxes that support universal education.

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Families who do not send their children to government-financed schools should not be required to pay taxes that support universal education.

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

301 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people believe that families who send their children to private schools should not have to pay taxes that support public education. I understand this opinion, but I disagree with it for several reasons.

On the one hand, there are some reasons why people support this idea. Families who choose private schools have to pay very high school fees. If they also pay taxes for public schools, they pay for education twice. They do not use public schools, so they think it is unfair that they have to pay for them. In addition, when children go to private schools, the government saves money, because there are fewer students in public schools. Therefore, some people think these families should get a tax reduction.

On the other hand, I believe that all families should pay taxes for public education. Firstly, education benefits the whole society, not only the students. When children receive a good education, they will become skilled workers, good citizens and taxpayers in the future. This helps the economy and reduces crime and poverty. So, everyone benefits from public education, even people who do not use it. Secondly, taxes do not work like this. For example, people who do not have children still pay taxes for schools, and people who never go to hospital still pay for public hospitals. Thirdly, if rich families stopped paying taxes for public schools, there would be less money for these schools, and the quality of education for poor children would become worse. This would make the gap between rich and poor bigger.

In my opinion, education is a public service, and everyone should support it, because it is important for the future of the country.

In conclusion, I disagree that families who send their children to private schools should not pay taxes for public education.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

296 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Some argue that families who choose not to send their children to state schools should be exempt from paying the taxes that fund public education. Although I can understand the reasoning behind this view, I strongly disagree with it.

Those who support this idea argue that it is a matter of fairness. Parents who send their children to private schools pay substantial tuition fees while also contributing through taxes to a system they do not use, which means they effectively pay for education twice. Moreover, by educating their children privately, these families actually reduce the burden on the state system, saving the government money. From this perspective, a tax exemption or reduction would seem reasonable.

However, I believe this argument is based on a misunderstanding of how public services and taxation work. Taxes are not payments for services that individuals personally use; they fund services that benefit society as a whole. Universal education produces a skilled workforce, drives economic growth, promotes social cohesion and reduces crime and unemployment. Every citizen, including those whose children attend private schools, benefits from living in a well-educated society. By the same logic, people without children would not pay for schools, and healthy people would not pay for hospitals, which would make public services impossible to fund.

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