IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry

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Đề bài

Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry
are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or
disagree with this point of view? Why or why not?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
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  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
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  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

311 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people believe that people's needs for farmland, housing and industry are more important than protecting land for endangered animals. I disagree with this opinion. Although human needs are important, I think we must also save land for endangered animals.

On the one hand, I understand why some people think human needs are more important. The world's population is growing quickly, so we need more land to grow food, build houses and develop industry. In many poor countries, people need land for farming to feed their families and earn money. For example, in some parts of Africa and Asia, farmers cut down forests to grow crops because they have no other way to make a living. Factories and industries also create jobs and help countries to develop.

On the other hand, I believe that saving land for endangered animals is also very important. Firstly, every animal species plays a role in nature. If one species disappears, it can affect many other plants and animals, and the whole ecosystem may be damaged. For example, bees are very important for pollinating crops, and without them, we would have less food. Secondly, once an animal becomes extinct, it is gone forever. We cannot bring it back. Many animals, such as tigers, elephants and rhinos, are in danger of extinction because their habitats are being destroyed. Thirdly, natural areas such as forests and wetlands also help people, because they provide clean air and water and protect us from floods.

In my opinion, we can meet human needs and protect animals at the same time. For example, governments can use land more efficiently, build taller buildings in cities and use modern farming methods to grow more food on less land.

In conclusion, I disagree that human needs are more important than saving land for endangered animals. We should find a balance between development and protecting nature.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

315 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Some people argue that the human need for farmland, housing and industry should take priority over preserving land for endangered species. While I recognise the importance of meeting human needs, I disagree with this view, as protecting wildlife habitats is ultimately in humanity's own interest, and the two goals need not be in conflict.

It is understandable why many people prioritise human needs. The global population continues to grow, increasing demand for food, homes and jobs. In developing countries, where poverty remains widespread, converting forests or grasslands into farmland may be the only way for families to earn a living. Industrial development also creates employment and drives economic growth, which can lift millions of people out of poverty. From this perspective, protecting land for animals may seem like a luxury that only wealthy nations can afford.

However, I believe this view is short-sighted. Firstly, endangered species are part of complex ecosystems that provide essential services to humans. Forests regulate the climate and water supply, wetlands filter pollutants and prevent flooding, and insects such as bees pollinate a large proportion of the world's food crops. Destroying habitats damages these systems, which can eventually harm agriculture and human health. Secondly, extinction is irreversible. Once a species disappears, it is lost forever, along with any potential benefits it might have offered, such as new medicines. Thirdly, many people believe we have a moral responsibility to protect other species with which we share the planet.

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