IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Some people say that computers have made life easier and more

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Đề bài

Some people say that computers have made life easier and more
convenient.

Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful.

What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

300 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Computers are used in almost every part of our lives today. Some people think that computers have made life easier and more convenient, while others believe that they have made life more complicated and stressful. In my opinion, computers have made life easier, although they have also caused some stress.

On the one hand, computers have made our lives much more convenient. Firstly, they help us to work faster. For example, in the past, people had to write documents by hand and do calculations on paper, but now computers can do these jobs in a few seconds. Secondly, computers make communication easier. We can send emails, make video calls and chat with friends and family in other countries at any time. Thirdly, we can do many things online, such as shopping, paying bills, booking tickets and studying, without leaving our home. This saves us a lot of time and money.

On the other hand, computers can also make life more stressful. Many people have to answer work emails and messages even in the evening and at weekends, so they never really relax. In addition, technology changes very quickly, so people, especially older people, have to learn new programs all the time, which can be difficult and frustrating. When a computer breaks down or gets a virus, people may lose important information. Moreover, spending too much time on computers can cause health problems, such as eye problems and back pain.

In my opinion, the problems are mainly caused by the way people use computers. If people use computers sensibly, for example, by turning them off after work, they can enjoy the benefits without too much stress.

In conclusion, although computers can sometimes make life more stressful, I believe that they have made life much easier and more convenient for most people.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

314 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Computers have become an integral part of modern life. While some people believe that they have made life easier and more convenient, others argue that they have made it more complicated and stressful. In my view, computers have, on the whole, simplified our lives, although they have also introduced new sources of stress.

The convenience brought by computers is undeniable. Tasks that once took hours, such as writing and editing documents, managing accounts or searching for information, can now be completed in minutes. Online banking, shopping and government services mean that people no longer need to queue at offices or travel to shops, saving considerable time. Communication has also been transformed: emails, messaging apps and video calls allow people to stay in contact with colleagues, friends and relatives around the world instantly and at little cost. For students, computers provide access to a vast range of educational resources, and for many workers, they make flexible and remote working possible.

However, computers have also brought new pressures. Because people can be contacted at any time, the boundary between work and personal life has become blurred, and many employees feel obliged to respond to emails late at night or during holidays. The rapid pace of technological change requires people to constantly learn new software and systems, which can be particularly stressful for older workers. In addition, problems such as technical failures, data loss, cybercrime and information overload can cause anxiety. Excessive computer use has also been linked to health issues, including eye strain, poor posture and sleep problems.

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