IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: It is generally agreed that society benefits from the work of its

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Đề bài

It is generally agreed that society benefits from the work of its
members.

Compare the contributions of artists to society with the contributions of
scientists to society.

Which type of contribution do you think is valued more by your society? Give
specific reasons to support your answer.

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

300 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Everyone agrees that society benefits from the work of its members. Artists and scientists both make important contributions to society, but in different ways. In this essay, I will compare their contributions and explain which one is valued more in my country, Vietnam.

Artists, such as painters, musicians, writers and filmmakers, make our lives more beautiful and meaningful. Their work helps people to relax and enjoy themselves after a hard day. For example, listening to music or watching a good film can make us feel happy and reduce stress. Artists also help to protect and share a country's culture and history. For instance, traditional Vietnamese music and paintings show the life and values of our ancestors. Moreover, art can make people think about important social problems, such as poverty or war.

Scientists, on the other hand, make more practical contributions. They discover new knowledge and invent new technologies that improve people's lives. For example, scientists have developed vaccines and medicines that save millions of lives. They have also created new technology, such as computers, smartphones and the internet, which make our work and communication easier. In addition, scientists help to solve big problems, such as climate change and food shortages.

In my opinion, in Vietnam, the contributions of scientists are valued more than those of artists. Firstly, Vietnam is a developing country, so people believe that science and technology are necessary for economic development. Secondly, parents usually encourage their children to study science subjects, such as mathematics, physics and information technology, because these subjects can lead to well-paid jobs. Many parents think that being an artist is not a stable career.

In conclusion, both artists and scientists make valuable contributions to society. However, in my country, scientists are valued more because their work is seen as more useful for development.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

312 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Society undoubtedly benefits from the work of all its members, but different professions contribute in different ways. This essay will compare the contributions of artists and scientists and then explain why, in my country, Vietnam, the work of scientists tends to be more highly valued.

Artists, including painters, musicians, writers and filmmakers, enrich society emotionally and culturally. Their work provides enjoyment and relaxation, helping people to cope with the stresses of daily life. Art also preserves and transmits cultural identity; traditional Vietnamese music, lacquer painting and folk poetry, for example, express the values and experiences of past generations. Furthermore, artists can encourage people to reflect on social issues, such as inequality or the consequences of war, and in doing so, they can influence public opinion and promote empathy.

Scientists, by contrast, contribute mainly through practical advances that improve the material conditions of life. Medical research has produced vaccines and treatments that have dramatically increased life expectancy, while developments in agriculture have helped to feed growing populations. Technological innovations, from electricity to the internet, have transformed the way people work, communicate and learn. Scientists are also central to addressing global challenges such as climate change, pandemics and energy shortages.

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