IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy

Đồng ý / không đồng ý 40 phút · tối thiểu 250 từ Bài mẫu 6.0 Bài mẫu 7.0 Bài mẫu 9.0 trong app

Đề bài

Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy
them and replace them with modern buildings?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

300 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Many cities today have to decide whether to keep their old, historic buildings or to knock them down and build modern buildings instead. In my opinion, cities should try to preserve their historic buildings, although modern buildings are also necessary.

Firstly, historic buildings are an important part of a city's history and culture. They show how people lived in the past and help younger generations to understand their history. For example, in Hanoi, the Old Quarter and old temples such as the Temple of Literature show the long history of the city. If these buildings are destroyed, this history will be lost forever, because they cannot be rebuilt.

Secondly, historic buildings make a city unique and beautiful. Modern buildings made of glass and steel look very similar in every city in the world. However, old buildings have special designs and styles that make each city different. For example, Paris and Rome are famous for their beautiful old buildings.

Thirdly, old buildings can bring economic benefits. Many tourists visit cities to see historic buildings, and tourism creates jobs and brings money to the city. For example, the ancient town of Hoi An in Vietnam attracts millions of tourists every year because of its old houses and streets.

On the other hand, I understand that cities need modern buildings. Populations are growing, so cities need more houses, offices and shopping centres. Some old buildings are also unsafe and expensive to repair. However, I think cities can build modern buildings in new areas and keep the historic buildings in the old areas. They can also repair old buildings and use them for new purposes, such as museums, cafes or hotels.

In conclusion, I believe that cities should try to preserve their old, historic buildings, because they are important for history, culture and tourism.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

300 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

As cities grow and modernise, they face a difficult choice between preserving historic buildings and replacing them with modern developments. In my view, cities should make every effort to preserve their historic architecture, while accommodating new development in ways that do not destroy their heritage.

The most important reason for preservation is that historic buildings are irreplaceable records of a city's past. They embody the architectural styles, building techniques and ways of life of previous generations, and they provide a tangible link to the history of a community. In Hanoi, for instance, the narrow tube houses of the Old Quarter and the French colonial buildings around Hoan Kiem Lake tell the story of the city's development over centuries. Once demolished, such buildings can never truly be recovered.

Secondly, historic buildings give cities a distinctive identity. Modern skyscrapers and shopping malls often look much the same from one city to another, whereas historic districts make each city unique. This distinctiveness contributes to residents' sense of belonging and civic pride, and it also makes cities more attractive places to live and work.

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