IELTS Writing Task 2 · Advantages & Disadvantages

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: The government has announced that it plans to build a new university.

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Đề bài

The government has announced that it plans to build a new university.

Some people think that your community would be a good place to locate the
university.

Compare the advantages and disadvantages of establishing a new university in
your community.

Use specific details in your discussion.

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Đề hỏi lợi và hại của một hiện tượng, hoặc lợi có lớn hơn hại không (Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?). Với dạng "outweigh" bắt buộc nêu bên nào nặng hơn.

  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + nêu bên nào lớn hơn (nếu đề hỏi outweigh).
  2. Thân bài 1Các lợi ích (hoặc mặt yếu hơn), có giải thích.
  3. Thân bài 2Các bất lợi (hoặc mặt mạnh hơn), có giải thích và ví dụ.
  4. Kết bàiKhẳng định lại đánh giá của bạn.
  • Đoạn bên bạn cho là nặng hơn nên viết sau và kỹ hơn.
  • Tránh liệt kê quá nhiều ý, 2 ý mỗi bên phát triển sâu là đủ.
  • Từ nối: One major benefit…, A significant drawback…

Bài mẫu band 6.0

306 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

The government has announced that it will build a new university, and some people think that my community would be a good place for it. Building a university in my community would bring many advantages, but there would also be some disadvantages. In this essay, I will compare them.

There are several advantages of having a new university in my community. Firstly, young people in my area could study at university without moving to a big city. At the moment, many students have to move to Hanoi or Ho Chi Minh City, which is very expensive for their families. Secondly, the university would create many jobs, not only for teachers and staff, but also for local people who work in shops, restaurants and rental houses. Thousands of students would spend money in the area, which would help local businesses. Thirdly, the university could improve the community in other ways. It might build new libraries, sports facilities and roads that local people could also use. It could also organise cultural events and give local people the chance to take short courses.

However, there would also be some disadvantages. Firstly, the population would increase quickly, so there would be more traffic and noise, and the area would become more crowded. Secondly, the prices of houses and rent might go up, because many students and staff would need somewhere to live. This would be difficult for local people with low incomes. Thirdly, building a large university would need a lot of land, so some farmland or green areas might be destroyed. In addition, some local people worry that students may cause problems, such as noisy parties late at night.

In conclusion, building a new university in my community would have both advantages and disadvantages. However, I believe that the advantages, especially education and jobs, are greater than the disadvantages.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

313 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

The government's plan to build a new university has led some people to suggest that my community would be a suitable location. Such a development would bring considerable benefits, but it would also create certain challenges. This essay will compare the advantages and disadvantages of establishing the university in my area.

The most significant advantage would be greater access to higher education. At present, young people from my town must move to large cities to attend university, which places a heavy financial burden on their families and discourages some from continuing their studies at all. A local university would make higher education more affordable and accessible. Secondly, the university would provide a major economic boost. It would directly employ academic and administrative staff, and the arrival of thousands of students would increase demand for housing, food, transport and entertainment, creating opportunities for local businesses. Thirdly, the university could enrich community life by opening its libraries and sports facilities to residents, hosting public lectures and cultural events, and working with local businesses and hospitals on research projects.

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