IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Businesses should hire employees for their entire lives.

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Businesses should hire employees for their entire lives.

Do you agree or disagree?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

309 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people believe that businesses should hire employees for their whole working lives. I disagree with this idea. Although lifetime employment has some advantages, I think it is not suitable for most businesses today.

On the one hand, lifetime employment has some benefits. Firstly, employees feel secure because they know they will not lose their jobs. This means they do not need to worry about money and can plan their future, such as buying a house or having children. Secondly, employees who work for a company for a long time often become very loyal and work hard for the company. They also gain a lot of experience and knowledge about the company. For example, in the past, many Japanese companies hired employees for life, and these employees were very loyal and dedicated.

On the other hand, I believe that lifetime employment has more disadvantages. Firstly, if employees know they cannot lose their jobs, some of them may become lazy and stop working hard. Secondly, the business world changes very quickly, especially because of new technology. Companies need to be flexible and hire people with new skills. If they must keep all their employees for life, they may have many workers whose skills are no longer useful. Thirdly, when a company has financial problems, it may need to reduce the number of employees to survive. If it cannot do this, the whole company may close, and all the employees will lose their jobs. In addition, many young people today prefer to change jobs to gain different experiences and get higher salaries.

In my opinion, businesses should offer good working conditions and job security to good employees, but they should not have to hire everyone for life.

In conclusion, I disagree that businesses should hire employees for their entire lives, because it makes companies less flexible and may reduce employees' motivation.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

315 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Some people argue that businesses should offer employees jobs for life. Although lifetime employment can bring benefits for both workers and companies, I disagree with this idea, as I believe it is incompatible with the demands of the modern economy.

There are certainly some advantages to lifetime employment. For employees, it offers exceptional security, removing the fear of unemployment and allowing them to make long-term financial commitments with confidence. For businesses, it can foster strong loyalty and a deep understanding of the company's operations, as staff who expect to remain with one employer are more likely to invest in their work and develop specialist knowledge. Japan's traditional system of lifetime employment, for example, is often credited with contributing to the country's rapid economic growth in the decades after the Second World War.

However, I believe the disadvantages outweigh these benefits. Firstly, guaranteed employment may reduce motivation for some employees, who know that they will keep their jobs regardless of their performance. Secondly, and more importantly, today's business environment is changing rapidly because of technological innovation and global competition. Companies must be able to adapt by acquiring new skills and restructuring when necessary. A commitment to keep all employees for life would make this extremely difficult, leaving businesses with staff whose skills are no longer needed. Indeed, even in Japan, lifetime employment has declined significantly as companies have struggled to remain competitive. Thirdly, if a company in financial difficulty is unable to reduce its workforce, it may go bankrupt, leading to the loss of all jobs rather than just some.

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