IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit.

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Đề bài

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

300 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people believe that businesses should do anything they can to make a profit. I disagree with this statement. Although making a profit is the main goal of a business, companies should not do anything that is illegal, unethical or harmful to society.

On the one hand, I understand why profit is important for businesses. Without profit, a company cannot survive. It needs money to pay its employees, buy materials, develop new products and grow. Profitable businesses also create jobs and pay taxes, which help the economy and society. For example, large companies like Samsung employ thousands of people in Vietnam and contribute a lot to the economy.

On the other hand, I believe that businesses should not do anything just to make money. Firstly, some companies harm the environment to save money. For example, some factories dump chemical waste into rivers instead of treating it properly, which pollutes the water and makes local people sick. Secondly, some businesses treat their workers badly. They pay very low wages, make workers work very long hours or ignore safety rules, which can cause accidents. Thirdly, some companies cheat their customers by selling poor-quality or dangerous products, or by giving false information in their advertisements. For example, some food companies have sold food with harmful chemicals, which damaged people's health.

In my opinion, businesses should make a profit in an honest and responsible way. They should follow the law, treat their workers and customers fairly and protect the environment. In fact, responsible companies often have a better reputation, so customers trust them and buy more of their products, which helps them to make more profit in the long term.

In conclusion, I disagree that businesses should do anything to make a profit. Profit is important, but businesses also have a responsibility to society.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

305 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Some people argue that the purpose of a business is to make money and that companies should therefore do whatever is necessary to maximise profit. While I accept that profitability is essential for any business, I strongly disagree that it justifies any means, as companies also have responsibilities towards their employees, customers, society and the environment.

There is no doubt that profit is vital. A company that does not make a profit cannot pay its staff, invest in new products or survive in a competitive market. Profitable businesses also benefit society by creating jobs, paying taxes and driving innovation and economic growth. In this sense, the pursuit of profit is not only legitimate but beneficial.

However, when companies pursue profit without regard for ethics or the law, the consequences can be severe. Some businesses cut costs by polluting the environment, for example by dumping untreated waste into rivers or releasing harmful emissions, which damages ecosystems and threatens public health. Others exploit workers by paying unfairly low wages, forcing them to work excessive hours or ignoring safety standards; the collapse of the Rana Plaza garment factory in Bangladesh, which killed over a thousand workers, illustrates the human cost of such practices. Still other companies deceive consumers with misleading advertising or unsafe products. Such behaviour may increase profits in the short term, but it harms society as a whole.

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