IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: School children are becoming

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Đề bài

School children are becoming
far too dependent on computers. This is having an alarming effect on reading and
writing skills. Teachers need to avoid using computers in the classroom at all costs
and go back to teaching basic study skills.

Do you agree or disagree?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
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  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
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  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

287 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people believe that schoolchildren are becoming too dependent on computers, and that this is having a bad effect on their reading and writing skills. They think teachers should stop using computers in the classroom and go back to teaching basic study skills. I partly agree with this opinion, but I do not think computers should be completely removed from classrooms.

On the one hand, it is true that using computers too much can harm children's reading and writing skills. Many children use spell checkers and autocorrect, so they do not learn how to spell words correctly. They also type more than they write by hand, so their handwriting becomes worse. In addition, children often read short texts on the internet and social media, so they may not be able to concentrate on long books. Some students also copy information from the internet instead of writing their own ideas.

On the other hand, I do not think teachers should avoid computers at all costs. Computers are very useful learning tools. They help students to find information quickly, watch educational videos and practise skills with interactive programs. Moreover, computer skills are very important for students' future jobs, because almost every job today requires using computers. If schools do not teach computer skills, students will not be prepared for the modern world.

In my opinion, teachers should use a balance of computers and traditional methods. Students should still practise handwriting, read books and write essays by hand, but they should also learn how to use computers in a useful way.

In conclusion, I partly agree that children are too dependent on computers, but I disagree that teachers should avoid using computers completely. A balanced approach is the best way.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

295 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

It has been argued that schoolchildren have become overly reliant on computers, which is damaging their reading and writing skills, and that teachers should therefore avoid using computers in the classroom altogether. While I share some of these concerns, I disagree that computers should be eliminated from classrooms.

There is some evidence that excessive reliance on computers can weaken basic literacy skills. Tools such as spell checkers and predictive text mean that children may not learn to spell correctly, while typing has largely replaced handwriting, which some research suggests helps with memory and learning. Furthermore, much of the reading children do on screens consists of short, fragmented texts, which may reduce their ability to concentrate on longer and more complex material. The ease of copying and pasting from websites can also discourage students from developing their own ideas and writing skills.

However, avoiding computers "at all costs" would be a mistake. Computers offer enormous educational benefits, giving students access to a vast range of resources, interactive exercises and multimedia materials that can make learning more engaging and personalised. More importantly, digital literacy is an essential skill in the modern world. Students need to learn how to research effectively, evaluate online sources critically and use technology for communication and problem-solving, skills that will be vital in higher education and the workplace. Removing computers from classrooms would leave students unprepared for these demands.

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