IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Governments should make more

Đồng ý / không đồng ý 40 phút · tối thiểu 250 từ Bài mẫu 6.0 Bài mẫu 7.0 Bài mẫu 9.0 trong app

Đề bài

Governments should make more
effort to promote alternative sources of energy.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

273 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people believe that governments should make more effort to promote alternative sources of energy, such as solar, wind and water power. I strongly agree with this opinion.

Firstly, traditional energy sources like coal, oil and gas cause serious pollution. When they are burned, they produce a lot of carbon dioxide and other harmful gases. This causes global warming, which leads to extreme weather such as floods, storms and droughts. It also causes air pollution, which is bad for people's health. Alternative energy sources such as solar and wind power are clean, so they do not pollute the environment.

Secondly, fossil fuels will run out in the future, because the amount of coal, oil and gas on Earth is limited. In contrast, solar, wind and water energy are renewable, so they will never run out. If governments start to develop alternative energy now, countries will have enough energy in the future.

Thirdly, alternative energy can help countries to save money and create jobs. Many countries have to buy oil and gas from other countries, which is expensive. If they produce their own clean energy, they can save money and depend less on other countries. In addition, building solar and wind farms creates many new jobs.

However, alternative energy is sometimes expensive to set up, and it does not always produce energy, for example when there is no sun or wind. Therefore, governments need to invest money in research and give support to companies and families who use clean energy.

In conclusion, I strongly agree that governments should do more to promote alternative energy, because it is clean, renewable and good for the economy.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

274 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

With growing concern about climate change and the limited supply of fossil fuels, many people argue that governments should do more to promote alternative sources of energy. I strongly agree with this view.

The most compelling reason is the environmental damage caused by fossil fuels. Burning coal, oil and gas is the main source of greenhouse gas emissions, which are driving global warming and increasing the frequency of extreme weather events such as heatwaves, floods and droughts. Fossil fuels also cause severe air pollution, which is responsible for millions of premature deaths each year. Renewable sources such as solar, wind and hydroelectric power produce little or no emissions, making them essential for a sustainable future.

There are also strong economic and strategic arguments. Fossil fuel reserves are finite and their prices can fluctuate sharply, as seen during recent energy crises, which can harm both households and businesses. By developing domestic renewable energy, countries can reduce their dependence on imported fuels and improve their energy security. Furthermore, the renewable energy sector has become a major source of employment and innovation, and the cost of solar and wind power has fallen dramatically in recent years, making it increasingly competitive.

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