IELTS Writing Task 2 · Two-part question

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Counties such as China, India

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Đề bài

Counties such as China, India
and Japan have unsustainable population growths. In fact many experts are of the
opinion that the population ‘explosion’ which is now a very worrying concern, is
the most serious threat to life on this planet.

Give some suggestions to address this problem.

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

279 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Many experts believe that rapid population growth is one of the most serious threats to life on our planet. When there are too many people, there is not enough food, water, housing and jobs, and the environment is damaged. In this essay, I will suggest some ways to solve this problem.

Firstly, governments should improve education, especially for girls and women. When women are well educated, they usually get married later and have fewer children. They also have more chances to work and earn money, so they do not depend on having many children. For example, in many countries where women have good education, the birth rate has fallen.

Secondly, governments should provide family planning services. Many families in poor areas do not have access to contraception or information about how to plan their families. If the government gives free or cheap contraception and health advice, couples can decide how many children they want to have.

Thirdly, governments should reduce poverty and improve health care. In poor countries, many people have a lot of children because they are afraid that some of their children will die young, or because they need children to work and take care of them when they are old. If health care and pensions are better, people will not need to have so many children.

Moreover, some governments can give rewards to families with fewer children, such as lower taxes or free education. However, these policies should not force people, because everyone has the right to decide about their family.

In conclusion, population growth is a serious problem, but it can be reduced by improving education for women, providing family planning services and reducing poverty.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

274 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Rapid population growth in some parts of the world is often described as a major threat to the planet, as it increases pressure on food, water, energy and the natural environment. This essay will suggest several measures that could help to address this problem.

The most effective long-term solution is to improve access to education, particularly for girls and young women. Research consistently shows that women who stay in school longer tend to marry later and have fewer children. Education also increases women's employment opportunities and gives them greater control over decisions about family size. Countries such as Bangladesh have seen significant falls in birth rates as female education has improved.

Secondly, governments should ensure that family planning services are widely available and affordable. In many developing regions, a large number of women who wish to avoid pregnancy do not have access to modern contraception. Providing free or low-cost contraceptives, together with reproductive health education, would allow couples to choose how many children they have.

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