IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work.

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In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents' absence.

Which viewpoint do you agree with?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

290 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

In today's competitive world, in many families both parents have to go out to work. Some people believe that children in these families benefit from the extra income, while others think that they do not get enough support because their parents are not at home. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion.

On the one hand, children can benefit from the extra money. When both parents work, the family has a higher income, so they can afford a better house, healthy food and good education for their children. For example, parents can pay for extra classes, music lessons, sports activities or a good university for their children. They can also travel together during holidays, which helps children learn about the world. In addition, working parents can be good role models for their children, showing them the importance of hard work.

On the other hand, children may not get enough attention and support. When both parents work full-time, they may come home late and feel tired, so they do not have much time to talk to their children, help them with homework or listen to their problems. Some children spend a lot of time alone or with babysitters, and they may feel lonely. As a result, they may have problems at school, or spend too much time playing games and using the internet.

In my opinion, children can benefit from both parents working, as long as the parents spend quality time with them. For example, they can have dinner together every day and do activities together at the weekend.

In conclusion, I believe that children benefit from the extra income, but parents must make sure that they still give their children enough time, love and support.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

292 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

In many families today, both parents work outside the home, often out of financial necessity. While some argue that children benefit from the additional income this provides, others believe they suffer from a lack of parental support. In my view, children can benefit from having two working parents, provided that parents make a conscious effort to spend quality time with them.

Those who emphasise the benefits point out that a second income can significantly improve a family's standard of living. It allows parents to provide better housing, nutritious food and access to good healthcare. Perhaps most importantly, extra income enables families to invest in their children's education, paying for books, tutoring, extracurricular activities and, eventually, university. Furthermore, working parents, particularly mothers, can serve as positive role models, demonstrating independence and the value of hard work.

On the other hand, critics argue that children may lack the attention and guidance they need when both parents work long hours. Parents who return home late and exhausted may have little energy to help with homework, discuss problems or simply enjoy time together. Young children may spend long periods in childcare or with relatives, while older children may be left unsupervised, which could increase the risk of behavioural problems or excessive screen use. Emotional support is crucial for children's development, and its absence can affect their confidence and well-being.

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