IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Most writers of fiction do not earn enough money to live from their writing.

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Most writers of fiction do not earn enough money to live from their writing.
Do you think the government should give them financial assistance to help encourage good literature?

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

304 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Most writers of novels and stories cannot earn enough money from their writing to live. Some people think that the government should give them financial support to encourage good literature. I partly agree with this idea, but I think the support should be limited and given carefully.

On the one hand, there are several reasons why the government should support writers. Firstly, literature is an important part of a country's culture. Good novels, poems and stories help to protect a country's language, history and values, and they help people to understand themselves and others. For example, famous Vietnamese works such as "The Tale of Kieu" are still read and loved today. Secondly, writing a good book takes a long time, sometimes several years. If writers have to work at other jobs to earn money, they may not have enough time to write. Financial help can give them time to focus on their work. Thirdly, without support, many talented writers may give up writing, and the country may lose many good books.

On the other hand, there are some problems with giving money to writers. Firstly, the government has limited money, and there are many more important needs, such as healthcare, education and helping poor people. Secondly, it is difficult to decide which writers should receive money, because it is not easy to judge what is "good literature". Thirdly, if writers depend on the government for money, they may not feel free to criticise the government in their work.

In my opinion, the government should provide some support, such as grants, prizes and scholarships for talented writers, but the money should be decided by independent experts, not by politicians.

In conclusion, I partly agree that the government should help fiction writers, because literature is important for culture, but the support should be limited and fair.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

318 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

It is well known that most fiction writers cannot support themselves through their writing alone. Some people therefore argue that governments should provide financial assistance to encourage the creation of good literature. I agree that some public support is justified, provided that it is limited, fairly allocated and does not compromise writers' independence.

There are several reasons why governments should support writers. Literature plays a vital role in a nation's cultural life: it preserves and enriches the language, reflects a society's history and values, and helps readers understand different perspectives and experiences. Great works of literature can also bring international recognition to a country and attract tourism. However, writing a serious novel often requires years of concentrated effort, and since few books become bestsellers, most writers must take other jobs to survive, leaving them little time or energy to write. Without financial support, many talented writers, particularly those from less wealthy backgrounds, may abandon writing altogether, and works of lasting value may never be produced. Moreover, the commercial market tends to favour popular genres, so literary or experimental fiction, which may have great artistic merit, often struggles to find a profitable audience.

On the other hand, there are valid objections. Public funds are limited, and many people would argue that money should be spent on more urgent needs, such as healthcare and education. Deciding which writers deserve support is also difficult and could lead to favouritism. Furthermore, if writers depend financially on the state, they may feel pressure to avoid criticising the government, which would undermine one of the important functions of literature.

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