IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine.

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Đề bài

More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine.

Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world.

Do you agree or disagree?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
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  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
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  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

282 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Nowadays, many qualified people, such as engineers, computer experts and doctors, move from poor countries to rich countries to work. Some people think that rich countries are stealing from poor countries, while others believe that this is just a natural movement of workers. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion.

On the one hand, some people believe that rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Poor countries spend a lot of money to educate and train these workers, for example in universities and hospitals. When these people move to rich countries, poor countries lose their investment and their skilled workers. As a result, poor countries do not have enough doctors, nurses and engineers. For example, some African countries have a serious shortage of doctors because many of them work in Europe or America. This makes it harder for poor countries to develop.

On the other hand, other people think that this is a natural movement of workers. Everyone has the right to choose where they live and work. Skilled workers move to rich countries because they can earn higher salaries and have better working conditions. In addition, many of them send money back to their families in their home countries, which helps the economy. Some of them also return home later with more experience and skills.

In my opinion, both views are partly true. People have the right to move for better opportunities, but rich countries should help poor countries, for example by supporting education and health care in those countries.

In conclusion, although the movement of skilled workers is natural, I think it can harm poor countries, so rich countries should take responsibility and help them.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

287 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

An increasing number of skilled professionals are leaving poorer countries to work in wealthier nations, particularly in fields such as engineering, information technology and medicine. Some argue that rich countries are effectively stealing talent from poor ones, while others see this as a natural feature of a global labour market. In my view, while migration itself is a legitimate choice, rich countries have a responsibility to address its harmful effects.

Those who believe rich countries are stealing from poorer nations point to the serious consequences of this "brain drain". Developing countries invest scarce public resources in educating doctors, nurses and engineers, only to see many of them leave once qualified. This can create critical shortages; some sub-Saharan African countries, for example, have far fewer doctors than they need, partly because many have moved to the UK, the USA or the Middle East. Wealthy countries benefit from skilled workers without having paid for their training, which seems unfair.

On the other hand, many people regard this movement as natural and even beneficial. Individuals have the right to seek better pay, working conditions and career opportunities, and it would be unjust to prevent them from doing so. Moreover, migrants often send substantial remittances to their families, which support household incomes and national economies. Some eventually return home, bringing valuable experience, skills and international connections.

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