IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices every day.

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Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employers.

Do you agree or disagree?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

300 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Because of computers and the internet, many office workers can now do much of their work at home instead of going to the office every day. Some people believe that working from home should be encouraged because it is good for both workers and employers. I mostly agree with this opinion.

Firstly, working from home is good for workers. They do not need to travel to the office, so they can save a lot of time and money. In big cities, people often spend one or two hours in traffic every day, which makes them tired and stressed. When they work at home, they can use this time to rest, exercise or spend time with their family. In addition, they can organise their working time more flexibly, which is very helpful for parents with young children.

Secondly, working from home is also good for employers. Companies can save money on office rent, electricity and other costs. Some studies also show that workers who work from home are happier and more productive, because they have fewer interruptions from colleagues. Moreover, companies can hire talented people who live far away from the office.

However, working from home also has some problems. Some workers may feel lonely because they do not meet their colleagues. It can also be difficult for teams to communicate and work together. In addition, some people find it hard to concentrate at home because of family members or other distractions.

In my opinion, the best way is to combine working from home and working in the office, for example two or three days a week at home.

In conclusion, I agree that working from home should be encouraged, because it saves time and money and makes workers happier, although it should be balanced with some days in the office.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

296 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Advances in technology have made it possible for many office employees to work from home rather than commuting to an office every day. I largely agree that this practice should be encouraged, as it offers significant benefits to both employees and employers, although it works best when combined with some time in the office.

For employees, the most obvious advantage is the elimination of daily commuting. This saves time, money and stress, particularly in large cities where journeys can be long and congested. The time saved can be devoted to family, exercise or rest, improving overall well-being. Working from home also gives employees greater flexibility to organise their schedules around personal commitments, which is especially valuable for parents and carers. Many people also find that they can concentrate better at home, away from the interruptions of an open-plan office.

Employers can also benefit considerably. Allowing staff to work remotely reduces the need for large and expensive office spaces, lowering costs. Several studies have suggested that remote workers can be as productive as, or even more productive than, office-based staff, and flexible working arrangements can improve staff satisfaction and retention. Furthermore, companies can recruit from a much wider pool of talent, regardless of where candidates live.

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