IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: In today's job market it is far more important to have practical skills

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Đề bài

In today's job market it is far more important to have practical skills
than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any
formal qualifications.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

278 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people believe that in today's job market, practical skills are much more important than theoretical knowledge, and in the future, people may not need any formal qualifications to get a job. I partly agree with the first idea, but I disagree with the second one.

Firstly, I agree that practical skills are very important today. Employers want workers who can do the job well from the first day. For example, a graphic designer needs to know how to use design software, and a salesperson needs good communication skills. These skills are often learned through practice and work experience, not from books. In addition, some big technology companies, such as Google, now hire people without university degrees if they have the right skills.

However, I think that theoretical knowledge is also important. Practical skills are based on theory. For example, an engineer must understand mathematics and physics to design a safe bridge, and a doctor must study biology and medicine for many years before treating patients. Without theoretical knowledge, workers may not understand why they do things, and they may make serious mistakes.

Secondly, I do not think that formal qualifications will disappear in the future. For many jobs, such as doctors, lawyers, pilots and teachers, qualifications are necessary to prove that people have the right knowledge and can do the job safely. Qualifications also help employers to choose candidates quickly.

In my opinion, both practical skills and theoretical knowledge are important, and the best workers have both.

In conclusion, although practical skills are becoming more important, I disagree that theoretical knowledge is less important, and I believe that formal qualifications will still be needed in the future.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

275 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

It is often argued that practical skills are now far more valuable than theoretical knowledge in the job market, and that formal qualifications may eventually become unnecessary. While I agree that practical skills are increasingly important, I believe that theoretical knowledge and formal qualifications will continue to play a vital role.

There is no doubt that employers increasingly value practical abilities. Many graduates complain that their degrees did not prepare them for the realities of the workplace, while employers frequently report a shortage of candidates with practical, job-ready skills. In fast-changing fields such as information technology, digital marketing and design, demonstrable skills and a strong portfolio can be more persuasive than a degree. Some major companies, including Google and Apple, have even removed degree requirements for certain positions, focusing instead on what candidates can actually do.

However, it would be a mistake to undervalue theoretical knowledge. Practical skills are often built on a strong theoretical foundation. An engineer who understands the principles of physics can solve unfamiliar problems, whereas someone with only practical experience may struggle when faced with a new situation. Theoretical knowledge also enables workers to adapt as technology and methods change.

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