IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Film stars and music celebrities may earn a great deal of money and live

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Film stars and music celebrities may earn a great deal of money and live
in luxurious surroundings, but many of them lead unhappy lives. Do you agree?

To what extent is this the price they pay for being famous?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
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Bài mẫu band 6.0

284 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Many film stars and music celebrities earn a lot of money and live in big, luxurious houses. However, some people believe that many of them have unhappy lives. I agree with this opinion, and I think that this unhappiness is partly the price they pay for being famous.

Firstly, famous people have very little privacy. Journalists and photographers follow them everywhere, and they take photos of them when they are shopping, eating in restaurants or spending time with their families. Their private lives, such as relationships and family problems, are often reported in newspapers and on social media. This can make them feel stressed and unable to live a normal life.

Secondly, celebrities are under a lot of pressure. They have to look perfect all the time, and they are often criticised by the public and on social media. If they make a small mistake, many people will attack them online. In addition, they work very long hours and travel a lot, so they do not have much time for their family and friends. As a result, some celebrities suffer from depression, or they use drugs and alcohol.

However, I do not think that all celebrities are unhappy. Many of them enjoy their work and their success, and they use their money and fame to help other people, for example by supporting charities. Their happiness also depends on their personality and how they deal with fame.

In my opinion, fame brings many problems, and celebrities have to accept these problems when they choose to become famous.

In conclusion, I agree that many celebrities lead unhappy lives, and I believe that the lack of privacy and pressure are the price they pay for being famous.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

283 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Although film stars and music celebrities often enjoy enormous wealth and luxurious lifestyles, it is frequently reported that many of them are unhappy. I agree that fame often brings significant personal difficulties, and to a large extent, this unhappiness is the price of their celebrity status.

The most obvious cost of fame is the loss of privacy. Celebrities are constantly watched by the media and the public, and even ordinary activities such as going to the supermarket or taking their children to school can attract photographers. Details of their relationships, health and family problems are frequently exposed, often in an exaggerated or distorted way. Social media has intensified this pressure, as celebrities are exposed to constant judgement and abuse from millions of strangers.

In addition, fame can create considerable psychological strain. Many celebrities feel pressure to maintain a perfect image and to continue achieving success, knowing that their popularity could disappear at any time. Demanding schedules and frequent travel can damage their personal relationships, while it may be difficult for them to know whether people value them for who they are or for their money and status. These pressures may explain why a number of famous people have struggled with depression, addiction and other mental health problems.

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