IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Genetic engineering is a dangerous trend.

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Genetic engineering is a dangerous trend. It should be limited.

To what extent do you agree?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

280 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Genetic engineering is a technology that allows scientists to change the genes of plants, animals and even humans. Some people think that genetic engineering is dangerous and it should be limited. I partly agree with this opinion.

On the one hand, genetic engineering can be dangerous. Firstly, we do not know the long-term effects of genetically modified food on human health. Some people worry that eating this food may cause allergies or other diseases in the future. Secondly, genetically modified plants may harm the environment. For example, they can spread to nature and affect other plants and insects. Thirdly, changing human genes raises serious moral problems. In the future, rich parents may choose the appearance or intelligence of their babies, which could create more inequality in society.

On the other hand, genetic engineering also has many benefits. In agriculture, scientists can create crops that grow faster, resist diseases and need less water. This can help to produce more food for the growing population of the world and reduce hunger in poor countries. In medicine, genetic engineering can help to cure serious diseases. For example, it is used to produce insulin for people with diabetes, and it may help to treat genetic diseases in the future.

In my opinion, genetic engineering should not be stopped, because it can bring many benefits. However, it should be controlled carefully by laws. Scientists should test new products carefully, and changing human genes for non-medical reasons should not be allowed.

In conclusion, I partly agree that genetic engineering can be dangerous and should be limited, but I believe it should be controlled rather than stopped, because it has many benefits for food production and medicine.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

281 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Genetic engineering, the direct modification of an organism's DNA, has advanced rapidly in recent decades. While some people regard it as a dangerous trend that should be restricted, I believe that it should be carefully regulated rather than broadly limited, as its potential benefits are considerable.

There are certainly legitimate concerns about genetic engineering. In agriculture, critics worry that genetically modified crops could have unforeseen effects on human health or the environment, for example by reducing biodiversity or allowing modified genes to spread to wild plants. The dominance of a few large biotechnology companies in this field also raises concerns about farmers' dependence on patented seeds. In medicine, the prospect of editing human embryos raises profound ethical questions. If parents could select traits such as intelligence or appearance, so-called "designer babies" might become a reality, potentially increasing social inequality and changing the human gene pool in ways that cannot be reversed.

However, the benefits of genetic engineering are too important to ignore. Genetically modified crops can be made more resistant to pests, diseases and drought, increasing yields and reducing the need for chemical pesticides, which could help feed a growing global population. In medicine, genetic engineering has already enabled the production of insulin and vaccines, and new techniques such as CRISPR offer the possibility of curing inherited diseases like sickle cell anaemia and cystic fibrosis.

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