IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Disruptive school students have a negative influence on others.

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Disruptive school students have a negative influence on others.
Students who are noisy and disobedient should be grouped together and taught separately.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer.

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

317 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people believe that disruptive students, who are noisy and disobedient, have a bad influence on other students, so they should be put together in a separate class. I partly agree that disruptive students cause problems, but I do not think that separating them into one group is a good solution.

On the one hand, it is true that disruptive students can have a negative effect on their classmates. When some students talk loudly, play with their phones or argue with the teacher, other students cannot concentrate. Teachers also have to spend a lot of time controlling the class, so they have less time to teach. As a result, hardworking students may learn less and get lower grades. In addition, some students may copy the bad behaviour of disruptive students. Therefore, some people think that if these students are taught separately, other students can study better.

On the other hand, I believe that putting all disruptive students together is not a good idea. Firstly, if these students are in the same class, they may influence each other and their behaviour may become even worse. Secondly, they may feel that the school has given up on them, so they may lose confidence and motivation. This could make them leave school early or even get involved in crime. Thirdly, many students behave badly because they have problems, such as family difficulties, learning difficulties or emotional problems. Separating them does not solve these problems.

In my opinion, schools should try to understand why students behave badly and help them. For example, schools can provide counsellors, give extra support to students with learning difficulties and work with parents. Teachers should also have clear rules and consequences for bad behaviour.

In conclusion, although disruptive students can have a negative influence on others, I disagree that they should be grouped together and taught separately. Schools should help them to change their behaviour instead.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

325 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Disruptive students can have a significantly negative effect on the learning of their classmates, and some people argue that noisy and disobedient students should therefore be grouped together and taught separately. While I agree that disruptive behaviour must be addressed, I largely disagree with this solution, as it is likely to worsen the problem rather than solve it.

There is no doubt that disruptive behaviour harms other students. When a few pupils constantly talk, refuse to follow instructions or challenge the teacher, it becomes difficult for others to concentrate, and teachers must spend valuable lesson time managing behaviour rather than teaching. Over time, this can lower the academic performance of the whole class and create a stressful environment for both students and staff. Separating disruptive students might therefore seem to protect the education of the majority.

However, grouping disruptive students together is likely to have serious negative consequences. Firstly, placing students with behavioural problems in the same class removes positive role models and may reinforce bad behaviour, as students encourage and compete with one another. Such classes can quickly become extremely difficult to teach. Secondly, being labelled as a "bad" student can damage young people's self-esteem and motivation, leading them to believe that they cannot succeed. This may increase the risk that they will drop out of school and become involved in antisocial behaviour or crime. Thirdly, disruptive behaviour is often a symptom of underlying problems, such as learning difficulties, family conflict or emotional distress. Separating these students does nothing to address these causes.

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