IELTS Writing Task 2 · Two-part question

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: "Although abuse of the system are inevitable, social welfare payments are essential to protect the rights citizens have to a guaranteed minimum income in a democratic society"

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"Although abuse of the system are inevitable, social welfare payments are essential to protect the rights citizens have to a guaranteed minimum income in a democratic society"
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Bài mẫu band 6.0

305 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people believe that social welfare payments are necessary to protect citizens' right to a minimum income in a democratic society, even though some people will always abuse the system. I agree with this opinion. In this essay, I will discuss both the benefits and problems of social welfare.

On the one hand, social welfare is very important. Firstly, it helps people who cannot support themselves, such as unemployed people, old people, sick people and people with disabilities. Without welfare payments, these people may not be able to pay for food, housing and medicine, and they may fall into extreme poverty. Secondly, welfare helps to reduce crime and social problems. When people have enough money to live, they are less likely to steal or commit other crimes. Thirdly, in a democratic society, everyone should have equal rights and a basic standard of living. Welfare shows that society cares about all its members, not only the rich.

On the other hand, it is true that some people abuse the welfare system. Some people claim benefits when they do not need them, for example by hiding their income or pretending to be sick. Others may become lazy and prefer to receive welfare instead of looking for a job. This is unfair to taxpayers, who work hard to pay for the system. In addition, welfare is very expensive for the government.

In my opinion, the benefits of welfare are much greater than the problems. The government should not stop welfare payments because of a small number of people who cheat. Instead, it should check claims carefully, punish people who cheat and help unemployed people to find jobs through training programmes.

In conclusion, I agree that although some people abuse the system, social welfare payments are essential to protect people's right to a minimum income in a democratic society.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

325 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

It is often argued that, although some abuse of the system is unavoidable, social welfare payments are essential to guarantee citizens a minimum income in a democratic society. I strongly agree with this view, as the benefits of welfare for individuals and society far outweigh the costs of occasional misuse.

The primary purpose of social welfare is to protect people who, through no fault of their own, cannot earn enough to live on. This includes those who have lost their jobs, people with long-term illnesses or disabilities, single parents and the elderly. Without a safety net, these individuals could face homelessness, hunger and the inability to afford medical care. Welfare therefore protects basic human dignity and ensures that misfortune does not lead to destitution. It also benefits society as a whole. By reducing extreme poverty, welfare helps to lower crime rates, improve public health and maintain social stability. Moreover, it allows people who have lost their jobs to search for suitable employment rather than accepting any work out of desperation, which can benefit the economy. In a democratic society that values equality, guaranteeing a minimum standard of living is a fundamental expression of citizenship.

It must be acknowledged, however, that some people abuse the welfare system. Fraudulent claims, such as concealing income or exaggerating illness, cost taxpayers money and undermine public support for welfare. Critics also argue that generous benefits can discourage some people from seeking work, creating long-term dependency.

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