IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Children who are brought up in the family that do not have a lot of money are better prepared to deal with problems when they become adults than children who are brought up by wealthy parent.

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Đề bài

Children who are brought up in the family that do not have a lot of money are better prepared to deal with problems when they become adults than children who are brought up by wealthy parent.

Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

314 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people believe that children who grow up in poor families are better prepared to deal with problems as adults than children from rich families. I partly agree with this statement, because children from poor families often learn important skills, but I do not think this is always true.

On the one hand, children from poor families often learn to deal with difficulties from a young age. They may have to help their parents with housework, take care of younger brothers and sisters or even work part-time to earn money. Because of this, they become independent, responsible and hardworking. They also learn to save money and to be happy with what they have. For example, my friend grew up in a poor family in the countryside, and he worked in the fields after school. Now he is a very hardworking and successful engineer, and he never gives up when he has problems at work. In contrast, some children from rich families have everything they want, so they may not learn how to deal with difficulties.

On the other hand, I do not think that poverty always prepares children well for adult life. Poor children often do not have enough food, good healthcare or a good education. They may also feel stressed because of their family's money problems. As a result, some of them may have fewer opportunities and find it more difficult to succeed. In addition, many children from rich families are also well prepared for adult life, because their parents teach them good values, such as hard work and responsibility, and give them a good education.

In my opinion, the way parents raise their children is more important than how much money they have.

In conclusion, I partly agree that children from poor families may be better prepared to deal with problems, but this depends more on their parents' teaching than on money.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

325 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

It is sometimes claimed that children raised in families with limited financial means are better equipped to cope with problems as adults than those brought up by wealthy parents. While I agree that growing up with less money can foster valuable qualities, I believe that a child's upbringing and values matter far more than their family's income.

There are reasons to believe that children from less affluent families develop resilience. Because their parents cannot provide everything they want, they often learn early to value money, manage limited resources and accept that not every wish can be fulfilled. Many take on responsibilities at a young age, such as caring for younger siblings, helping with household tasks or working part-time, which can make them independent, hardworking and resourceful. A friend of mine, for example, grew up on a small farm and spent his school holidays working in the fields; today he is known at his company for his determination and calmness under pressure. By contrast, some children of wealthy parents, who have always had their problems solved for them, may struggle when they face setbacks for the first time.

However, it would be wrong to suggest that poverty is an advantage. Children from poor families often face serious disadvantages, including inadequate nutrition, limited access to healthcare and lower-quality education. Financial stress within the family can also affect children's emotional well-being and confidence. These difficulties can limit their opportunities and make it harder, not easier, for them to cope with problems later in life. Furthermore, many wealthy parents deliberately teach their children the value of hard work and responsibility, and the education and experiences they can afford may equip their children with excellent problem-solving skills.

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