IELTS Writing Task 2 · Advantages & Disadvantages

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Some people think high school graduates should travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to study at university.

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Some people think high school graduates should travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to study at university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both approaches.

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + nêu bên nào lớn hơn (nếu đề hỏi outweigh).
  2. Thân bài 1Các lợi ích (hoặc mặt yếu hơn), có giải thích.
  3. Thân bài 2Các bất lợi (hoặc mặt mạnh hơn), có giải thích và ví dụ.
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  • Tránh liệt kê quá nhiều ý, 2 ý mỗi bên phát triển sâu là đủ.
  • Từ nối: One major benefit…, A significant drawback…

Bài mẫu band 6.0

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Some people believe that high school graduates should travel or work for a while before going to university, while others think they should start university immediately. In this essay, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both approaches.

Taking time to travel or work before university has several advantages. Firstly, young people can gain real-life experience and learn useful skills, such as communication, teamwork and managing money. Secondly, travelling helps them to learn about different cultures and become more independent and confident. Thirdly, this time allows them to think carefully about what they really want to study, so they are less likely to choose the wrong course. In addition, if they work, they can save money for their university fees. However, there are also some disadvantages. Students may forget some of the knowledge they learned at school, and it may be hard for them to start studying again. Some may even decide not to go to university at all. Travelling can also be very expensive.

On the other hand, going directly to university also has advantages and disadvantages. The main advantage is that students can continue studying while their knowledge is still fresh and they still have good study habits. They can also graduate earlier, start their careers sooner and begin earning money earlier than their friends who take a year off. However, some students who go directly to university are not mature enough, and they may not know what they really want to study. As a result, some of them choose the wrong subject, lose interest and change courses or even drop out.

In my opinion, both approaches can be good. The best choice depends on the student. Students who know what they want to study should go directly to university, while those who are unsure may benefit from taking a year off.

In conclusion, both approaches have advantages and disadvantages, and students should choose carefully based on their own situation.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

309 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

After finishing secondary school, some young people choose to spend a period travelling or working before entering university, while others proceed directly to higher education. Both paths have their own advantages and disadvantages, which this essay will examine.

Taking time out before university can offer valuable benefits. Working allows young people to gain practical experience and develop skills such as teamwork, time management and responsibility, while also saving money towards university costs. Travelling, particularly abroad, can broaden their horizons, improve their language skills and make them more independent and adaptable. Perhaps most importantly, a break from formal education gives students time to reflect on their interests and goals, meaning that they are more likely to choose a university course that genuinely suits them and to approach their studies with greater maturity and motivation. However, this approach also has drawbacks. After a year or more away from study, some students find it difficult to readjust to academic work and may have forgotten important knowledge. There is also a risk that some will lose interest in further education altogether, and travel can be expensive, making it an option mainly for wealthier families.

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