IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilt of committing murder.

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By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilt of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
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Bài mẫu band 6.0

293 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people believe that when a society punishes murderers with the death penalty, it is also committing murder, so life in prison is a better punishment. I mostly agree with this statement, although I understand why some people support the death penalty.

On the one hand, some people think that the death penalty is a suitable punishment for murderers. They believe that if someone takes another person's life, he or she should lose their own life. This is fair for the victim's family, who feel great pain and want justice. Supporters also argue that the death penalty stops other people from committing murder, because they are afraid of being killed. Moreover, keeping a prisoner in prison for life costs the government a lot of money.

On the other hand, I believe that life in prison is a better punishment. Firstly, killing a person is wrong, even when the government does it. If society kills murderers, it is doing the same thing that it is punishing them for. Secondly, the justice system is not perfect, and sometimes innocent people are found guilty. For example, in the United States, many prisoners on death row were later found to be innocent. If they are executed, the mistake cannot be corrected. However, if they are in prison, they can be released. Thirdly, there is not much evidence that the death penalty reduces crime. Countries without the death penalty do not have higher murder rates than countries with it.

In my opinion, life in prison is a serious punishment that protects society, and it also gives prisoners a chance to regret their crimes.

In conclusion, I agree that life imprisonment is a better punishment than the death penalty, because executing people is wrong and mistakes cannot be corrected.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

298 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

It is sometimes argued that by executing murderers, society itself becomes guilty of murder, and that life imprisonment is therefore a more appropriate punishment. Although I understand the arguments in favour of the death penalty, I largely agree with this statement.

Supporters of capital punishment put forward several arguments. Firstly, they believe in retribution: someone who deliberately takes a life deserves to lose their own, and this provides a sense of justice for victims' families. Secondly, they argue that the death penalty acts as a deterrent, discouraging potential criminals from committing serious crimes. Finally, some claim that executing murderers is less costly than keeping them in prison for the rest of their lives.

However, I find the arguments against the death penalty more convincing. The most important is the risk of executing innocent people. No legal system is perfect, and there have been numerous cases in which people sentenced to death were later proven innocent, often through DNA evidence. While a wrongly imprisoned person can be released and compensated, an execution can never be reversed. Moreover, there is little reliable evidence that capital punishment deters crime more effectively than long prison sentences; many countries that have abolished it have lower murder rates than those that retain it. Even the financial argument is questionable, as the lengthy appeals process in death penalty cases often makes them more expensive than life imprisonment.

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