IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Action movies with spectacular car chases are very popular with young people.

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Action movies with spectacular car chases are very popular with young people. it is often said that these sorts of movies lead to an increase in car accidents among young drivers as they try to copy what they have seen in the films.

Do you agree that such movies increase the amount of bad driving? What can be done to encourage young people to drive more safely?

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

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Action films with exciting car chases are very popular among young people. Some people believe that these films cause more car accidents, because young drivers try to copy what they see. I partly agree with this opinion. In this essay, I will explain my view and suggest ways to help young people drive more safely.

On the one hand, I agree that action films may have some influence on young drivers. In these films, the heroes drive very fast, make dangerous turns and escape from the police without getting hurt. This can make young people think that dangerous driving is exciting and cool. Some young drivers may want to show off to their friends by driving fast or racing on the streets. For example, after the "Fast and Furious" films became popular, there were reports of illegal street racing in some cities.

On the other hand, I do not think that films are the main cause of bad driving. Most young people know that films are not real life, and millions of people watch action films without driving dangerously. Other factors are more important, such as lack of experience, drinking alcohol before driving, using mobile phones while driving and peer pressure from friends.

There are several ways to encourage young people to drive more safely. Firstly, driving tests should be more difficult, and new drivers should have more lessons before they get their licence. Secondly, there should be stricter rules for young drivers, such as limits on driving at night or carrying many passengers. Thirdly, the police should give heavy fines to drivers who speed or drink and drive. Finally, schools and the media can run campaigns to show young people the real results of dangerous driving.

In conclusion, action films may have a small influence on young drivers, but other factors are more important. Better training, stricter rules and education can help young people drive more safely.

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Action films featuring dramatic car chases are extremely popular with young audiences, and it is often claimed that they encourage young drivers to imitate dangerous manoeuvres, leading to more accidents. While I accept that such films may have some influence, I believe their impact is relatively minor compared with other factors. This essay will discuss this issue and suggest ways of promoting safer driving among young people.

There is some reason to believe that action films contribute to reckless driving. These films typically glamorise speed and risk-taking, portraying drivers who weave through traffic at high speed, perform spectacular stunts and escape without consequences. For young people, who are naturally more inclined to take risks and seek excitement, such images may make dangerous driving seem thrilling and admirable. There have been cases of illegal street racing linked to the popularity of certain film franchises.

However, I believe that films are not a major cause of bad driving. The vast majority of viewers clearly distinguish between fiction and reality and would never attempt to copy film stunts on public roads. Research into road accidents suggests that the main reasons young drivers are over-represented in crash statistics are inexperience, overconfidence, speeding, driving under the influence of alcohol, distraction from mobile phones and the influence of peers in the car.

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