IELTS Writing Task 2 · Two-part question

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old peopleswheresthere are nurses to look after them.

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In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old peopleswheresthere are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care.

Who should be responsible for our old people?

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

308 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

In Britain, many old people move into care homes, where nurses look after them, and sometimes the government pays for this care. This raises the question of who should be responsible for taking care of old people. In my opinion, families should have the main responsibility, but the government should also help.

On the one hand, I believe that families should take care of their elderly members. Our parents took care of us when we were young, so when they become old, it is our duty to take care of them. Old people usually feel happier and less lonely when they live with or near their families, because they can see their children and grandchildren every day. For example, in Vietnam, most old people live with their children, and the family takes care of them. This also helps young children to learn to respect and care for older people.

On the other hand, families cannot always do everything. Many people today work long hours, and some live far away from their parents, so they do not have time to take care of them. In addition, some old people have serious health problems, such as dementia, and they need professional medical care that their families cannot provide. Some families also do not have enough money to pay for this care. In these cases, the government should help, for example by providing nursing homes, home care services and pensions. Old people have worked and paid taxes for many years, so they deserve support from the government.

In my opinion, families should be responsible for taking care of their elderly parents, but the government should support families and provide care for old people who have no family or who need special medical care.

In conclusion, I believe that the responsibility for old people should be shared between families and the government.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

323 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

In Britain, it is common for elderly people to move into residential care homes staffed by nurses, with the cost sometimes met by the government. This raises an important question about who should be responsible for caring for older people. In my view, families should play the central role, but the state must provide substantial support.

There are strong arguments for placing the primary responsibility on families. Many people believe that children have a moral duty to care for the parents who raised them, and in cultures such as Vietnam's, it is still normal for elderly parents to live with their adult children. Older people cared for by their families are usually less isolated and lonelier, since they remain surrounded by people who love them and continue to play a role in family life. This arrangement also benefits younger generations, as grandparents can help with childcare and pass on their knowledge and traditions.

However, relying solely on families is often unrealistic. In modern societies, both adult children frequently work full-time, and many live far from their parents because of work. Caring for a frail elderly person can be exhausting and may force carers to reduce their working hours or give up their jobs. Furthermore, some older people suffer from conditions such as advanced dementia or severe disability that require specialist medical care which families cannot provide. Others have no family at all. In such cases, the government has a clear responsibility to help. Older people have contributed to society throughout their working lives through their labour and taxes, and they deserve dignity and security in old age.

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