IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Very few schoolchildren learn about the value of money and how to look after it, yet this is a critical life skill that should be taught as part of the school curriculum.

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Very few schoolchildren learn about the value of money and how to look after it, yet this is a critical life skill that should be taught as part of the school curriculum.

Do you agree or disagree?

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  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
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Bài mẫu band 6.0

285 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Nowadays, very few children learn about the value of money and how to manage it at school. Some people believe that this is an important life skill and it should be taught as part of the school curriculum. I completely agree with this opinion.

Firstly, managing money is a skill that everyone needs in their life. When young people grow up, they have to pay for many things, such as rent, food, bills and transport. If they do not know how to make a budget, they may spend too much money and get into debt. For example, many young people use credit cards without understanding interest rates, and they end up with a lot of debt. If they learn about money at school, they can avoid these problems.

Secondly, not all parents can teach their children about money. Some parents do not have good knowledge about finance themselves, and some parents are too busy to teach their children. Therefore, school is the best place where all children can learn this skill equally.

Thirdly, learning about money can help children to understand the value of things and to save money for the future. They can learn that money comes from hard work, so they will not waste it. They can also learn how to save money for important goals, such as going to university or buying a house.

However, some people may say that schools are already too busy with other subjects. In my opinion, money lessons can be included in mathematics classes, so it does not take too much time.

In conclusion, I strongly agree that schools should teach children how to manage money, because it is a very important skill for their future life.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

287 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

It is often argued that few children learn how to manage money, despite this being an essential life skill, and that financial education should therefore be included in the school curriculum. I strongly agree with this view.

The most important reason is that financial skills are necessary for everyone in adult life. Young people leaving school soon have to deal with rent, bills, taxes, loans and credit cards, often without any guidance. Without an understanding of budgeting, saving and interest, they are at risk of making poor decisions, such as accumulating high-interest debt or failing to save for emergencies. In many countries, rising levels of personal debt among young adults suggest that many are not adequately prepared for these responsibilities.

Another reason is fairness. Some children learn about money from their parents, but many families lack the knowledge or confidence to teach these skills, and some face financial difficulties themselves. Teaching financial literacy in schools would ensure that all children, regardless of their background, have the same opportunity to learn how to manage their finances. This could help to break cycles of poverty and debt across generations.

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