IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: The mass media, including television, radio and newspapers, have great influence in shaping people's ideas.

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The mass media, including television, radio and newspapers, have great influence in shaping people's ideas.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer.

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  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
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  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
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Bài mẫu band 6.0

297 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

The mass media, such as television, radio and newspapers, are part of our daily lives. Some people believe that the media have a great influence on people's ideas. I agree with this statement for several reasons.

Firstly, the media decide what information people receive. Most people learn about news and events in the world through television, radio, newspapers and the internet. The media choose which stories to report and which to ignore, so they decide what people think is important. For example, if the news talks about crime every day, people may think that their city is very dangerous, even if crime is actually decreasing.

Secondly, the media influence people's opinions about politics and social issues. During elections, newspapers and TV channels often support certain politicians or parties, and this can affect how people vote. The way a story is reported, for example the words and pictures used, can also make people feel positive or negative about a person or an event.

Thirdly, the media influence people's lifestyles and values, especially young people. Advertisements, films and TV programmes show people what to wear, what to buy and how to look. For example, many young people want to buy the same clothes or phones as celebrities they see on TV. The media can also have positive effects, for example by teaching people about health or encouraging them to protect the environment.

However, the media do not control people's ideas completely. People are also influenced by their families, friends, education and personal experiences. Educated people can think critically and compare different sources of information.

In conclusion, I agree that the mass media have a great influence on people's ideas, because they decide what information people receive and influence their opinions and lifestyles. However, people can also think for themselves.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

318 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Television, radio and newspapers, together with online media, play a central role in modern life, and it is often claimed that they have a great influence on shaping people's ideas. I largely agree with this statement, although I believe that the media's influence is limited by other factors, such as education and personal experience.

The most important way in which the media shape people's ideas is by determining what information they receive. Since most people cannot directly witness national or international events, they depend on the media to tell them what is happening. By choosing which stories to cover and how prominently to present them, editors effectively decide which issues the public considers important. For example, extensive coverage of crime can make people believe that society is becoming more dangerous, even when crime rates are falling.

Secondly, the media influence how people interpret events. The language, images and experts chosen to present a story can encourage audiences to see it in a particular way. During elections, for instance, newspapers that openly support particular parties can shape voters' perceptions of candidates and policies. In countries where the media are controlled by the government, this influence can be used to promote official views and suppress criticism.

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