IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Some governments say how many children a family can hare in their country.

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Đề bài

Some governments say how many children a family can hare in their country. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes. It is sometimes necessary and right for a government to control the population in this way.

Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer.

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

299 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some governments decide how many children a family can have, and they may use taxes to control the number of children. Some people believe that it is sometimes necessary and right for governments to control the population in this way. I partly agree with this opinion.

On the one hand, controlling the population can be necessary in some situations. When a country's population grows too fast, there may not be enough food, water, houses, schools, hospitals and jobs for everyone. This can lead to poverty, unemployment and environmental problems. For example, China introduced the one-child policy in 1979 because its population was growing very quickly. This policy helped to slow down population growth and may have helped China's economy to develop. Using taxes or other financial measures can encourage families to have fewer children without using force.

On the other hand, I believe that controlling the number of children has many problems. Firstly, deciding how many children to have is a very personal decision, and many people think that the government should not interfere in it. Secondly, strict population policies can cause serious social problems. In China, the one-child policy led to an imbalance between men and women, because many families preferred boys. It also caused a rapidly ageing population, and now China has too few young workers. Thirdly, taxes on families with more children may be unfair to poor families, who may suffer even more.

In my opinion, governments should not force families to have a certain number of children. Instead, they can reduce population growth in other ways, such as improving education for women, providing family planning services and reducing poverty.

In conclusion, I partly agree that population control can be necessary, but I believe governments should use education and support rather than strict rules and taxes.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

327 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Some governments regulate the number of children families may have, sometimes using taxation as a means of control. It has been argued that such measures are occasionally necessary and justified. While I accept that rapid population growth can create serious problems, I largely disagree that governments should directly limit family size, as there are fairer and more effective alternatives.

There are situations in which population control may appear necessary. When a population grows faster than a country's economy and infrastructure can support, the result may be shortages of food, housing, healthcare, education and employment, as well as environmental degradation. China's one-child policy, introduced in 1979, was motivated by such concerns, and the government claimed that it prevented hundreds of millions of births and contributed to the country's rapid economic growth. Financial measures, such as taxes or the withdrawal of benefits for larger families, may also seem less coercive than outright bans.

However, I believe that such policies raise serious ethical and practical problems. The decision to have children is one of the most personal choices people make, and many regard it as a fundamental human right that should not be controlled by the state. Furthermore, strict population controls can have damaging long-term consequences. In China, the one-child policy contributed to a significant gender imbalance, as a cultural preference for sons led to sex-selective abortions, and it has produced a rapidly ageing population with a shrinking workforce. The government has since reversed the policy and now encourages families to have more children. Tax-based controls can also be unfair, as they penalise poorer families most severely and may harm children born into larger families.

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