IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: 'Telecommuting' refers to workers doing their jobs from home for part of each week and communicating with their office using computer technology.

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'Telecommuting' refers to workers doing their jobs from home for part of each week and communicating with their office using computer technology.

Telecommuting is growing in many countries and is expected to be common for most office workers in the coming decades.

How do you think society will be affected by the growth of telecommuting?

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

312 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Telecommuting means working from home for part of the week and communicating with the office by using computers and the internet. This way of working is becoming more popular in many countries, and it may become common for most office workers in the future. In this essay, I will discuss how society will be affected by this trend.

There are several positive effects of telecommuting. Firstly, there will be less traffic on the roads. If many people work from home, fewer people will travel to the office every day, so there will be fewer traffic jams and less air pollution. Secondly, workers can save time and money, because they do not need to travel to work or buy lunch in the city. They can use this time to rest, do exercise or spend time with their families. Thirdly, telecommuting can help parents with young children and people with disabilities to work more easily. In addition, companies can save money on office rent and electricity.

However, telecommuting may also have some negative effects. Firstly, people who work from home may feel lonely and isolated, because they do not meet their colleagues every day. Secondly, it may be difficult for them to separate work and family life. Some people may work too many hours, while others may be distracted by their children, housework or television. Thirdly, businesses in city centres, such as restaurants, cafes and shops, may lose customers, because fewer office workers will be there during the week. Finally, communication and teamwork may become more difficult when people do not work in the same place.

In my opinion, telecommuting will have more positive effects than negative effects if people and companies use it in the right way.

In conclusion, the growth of telecommuting will reduce traffic and give workers more flexibility, but it may also cause loneliness and problems for city centre businesses.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

323 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Telecommuting, in which employees work from home for part of the week and stay in contact with their workplace through computer technology, is becoming increasingly common and may soon be the norm for many office workers. This essay will examine how its growth is likely to affect society, both positively and negatively.

One of the most significant benefits will be a reduction in commuting. With fewer people travelling to offices each day, traffic congestion and air pollution in cities should decline, and public transport will become less crowded. Workers will also save the time, money and stress associated with daily commuting, which could improve their quality of life and allow them to spend more time with their families or on leisure activities. Telecommuting may also make the labour market more inclusive, enabling parents with young children, carers and people with disabilities to participate more fully in employment. Furthermore, since workers will no longer need to live close to their offices, some may move from expensive cities to smaller towns or rural areas, potentially easing housing pressure in cities and revitalising rural communities.

However, telecommuting will also bring challenges. Many workers may experience isolation and loneliness, as the workplace has traditionally been an important source of social interaction. The boundary between work and home life may also become blurred, leading some people to work excessively long hours. For companies, maintaining effective teamwork, communication and company culture may become more difficult, and younger employees may lose opportunities to learn from experienced colleagues. In addition, businesses in city centres that depend on office workers, such as cafés, restaurants and shops, may suffer a decline in trade.

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