IELTS Writing Task 2 · Two-part question

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that this is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies.

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Đề bài

Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that this is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting.

Write an essay expresing your point of view.

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

306 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

In most societies, women play a bigger role than men in raising children. Some people believe this is because women are better parents than men, while others think that men are just as good at parenting as women. In my opinion, men can be just as good parents as women.

On the one hand, some people believe that women are better parents. Firstly, mothers have a special connection with their babies, because they carry them during pregnancy and often breastfeed them. Secondly, many people think that women are naturally more caring, patient and sensitive to children's feelings. Thirdly, in many cultures, girls are taught from a young age how to take care of younger children, so they have more experience when they become mothers.

On the other hand, I believe that men are just as good at parenting as women. Firstly, the skills needed to be a good parent, such as patience, love and responsibility, can be learned by both men and women. Many fathers today take care of their children very well. For example, my uncle stays at home to take care of his two children while his wife works, and his children are very happy and healthy. Secondly, I think the main reason why women do more childcare is not because they are better, but because of tradition. In the past, men were expected to work and earn money, while women were expected to stay at home. Thirdly, children need both their mother and father, because each parent can teach them different things.

In my opinion, men should be encouraged to take a bigger role in raising children. Governments and companies can help by giving fathers longer paternity leave.

In conclusion, although women have traditionally had a greater role in raising children, I believe that men can be just as good parents as women.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

315 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

In most societies, women take on the greater share of child-rearing, and some people believe this is because they are naturally better parents. Others argue that men are equally capable of raising children. In my view, men can be just as good parents as women, and the unequal division of childcare reflects tradition and social expectations rather than any natural difference in ability.

Those who believe women are better parents often point to biological factors. Mothers carry their children during pregnancy and may breastfeed them, which can create a strong early bond. It is also commonly claimed that women are naturally more nurturing, patient and attentive to children's emotional needs. In addition, girls in many cultures are encouraged from an early age to care for younger siblings, giving them more experience by the time they become parents.

However, I believe that the qualities that make a good parent, such as love, patience, consistency and responsibility, are not determined by gender. Research has shown that fathers who are actively involved in caring for their children form equally strong bonds with them, and that children benefit greatly from having involved fathers. Many fathers today are primary carers, and their children thrive. The reason women still do more childcare in most societies is largely historical and cultural: for generations, men were expected to be breadwinners and women to stay at home, and workplace policies, such as limited paternity leave, have reinforced this division. Moreover, the belief that women are naturally better parents can be harmful, as it places an unfair burden on mothers and discourages fathers from taking an active role.

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