IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like men.

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Đề bài

Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like men.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

282 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people believe that women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force in the same way as men. I strongly agree with this opinion.

Firstly, women should have the same rights as men. In a modern society, men and women are equal, so women should be able to choose any career they want, including a military career. If a woman wants to serve her country and she is able to do the job, there is no reason to stop her. Not allowing women to join the military is a kind of discrimination.

Secondly, women can do many jobs in the military very well. Modern armies do not only need physical strength. They also need people with skills in technology, medicine, communication, intelligence and leadership. Many women are excellent pilots, engineers, doctors and officers. For example, in many countries such as the USA, Israel and Norway, women serve in the military and do important jobs successfully.

Thirdly, having women in the military can bring benefits. Women can bring different ideas and skills to the team. In some situations, for example in peacekeeping missions, female soldiers can communicate more easily with local women and children.

However, some people worry that women are not as physically strong as men, so they may not be suitable for some combat roles. I think the military should have the same physical tests for men and women, and anyone who passes the tests should be allowed to do the job.

In conclusion, I strongly agree that women should be allowed to join the army, navy and air force like men, because they have equal rights and they can do military jobs very well.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

290 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

There has long been debate about whether women should be allowed to serve in the armed forces on the same terms as men. I strongly agree that they should, provided that the same standards apply to everyone.

The main argument in favour of this view is equality. In modern societies, women have the right to pursue any career, and it would be inconsistent to exclude them from military service solely because of their gender. Many women wish to serve their country and are fully capable of doing so. Denying them this opportunity not only limits their choices but also reinforces outdated stereotypes about the roles of men and women.

Moreover, modern warfare relies on a wide range of skills, many of which have little to do with physical strength. Armed forces need pilots, engineers, intelligence analysts, cyber security experts, doctors and commanders, and women have proven highly effective in all of these roles. Countries such as Israel, Norway and the United States have integrated women into their armed forces, including in combat roles, with considerable success. In addition, diverse teams can bring a broader range of perspectives and skills; in peacekeeping operations, for example, female personnel are often better able to engage with local women and communities.

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