IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a

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Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a
very early age and should spend most of their time on school studies.

Others believe that young children should spend most of their time playing.

Compare these two views. Which view do you agree with? Why?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
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  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
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Bài mẫu band 6.0

313 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people believe that children should start formal education at a very young age and spend most of their time studying. Others think that young children should spend most of their time playing. In this essay, I will compare these two views and explain why I agree with the second view.

On the one hand, some people believe that children should start school early. Firstly, young children learn very quickly, so it is a good time for them to learn reading, writing, mathematics and foreign languages. For example, many parents in my country send their children to English classes when they are only four or five years old. Secondly, children who start studying early may have an advantage over other children when they go to primary school. Thirdly, studying helps children to learn discipline and good habits, such as sitting still, listening to teachers and following rules.

On the other hand, other people believe that young children should spend most of their time playing. In my opinion, this view is better. Firstly, playing is a natural way for children to learn. When they play, they use their imagination, solve problems and learn about the world around them. For example, when children build things with blocks, they learn about shapes and balance. Secondly, playing with other children helps them to develop social skills, such as sharing, cooperating and communicating. Thirdly, if young children have to study too much, they may feel stressed and lose interest in learning. Childhood is a short time, and children should enjoy it.

In my opinion, young children should mainly learn through play, and formal education can start later, when they are about six or seven years old.

In conclusion, although early formal education has some benefits, I agree that young children should spend most of their time playing, because it helps them to learn naturally and develop important skills.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

315 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

There is a long-standing debate about how young children should spend their time. Some people believe that formal education should begin very early and that children should focus mainly on academic study, while others argue that young children should spend most of their time playing. Having compared both views, I agree with the latter.

Those who favour early formal education argue that young children's brains are highly receptive, making early childhood an ideal time to learn skills such as reading, arithmetic and foreign languages. They believe that children who begin studying early will gain an advantage over their peers and be better prepared for the competitive demands of later schooling. In addition, structured lessons can help children develop discipline, concentration and the ability to follow instructions. In many Asian countries, including Vietnam, it is common for parents to enrol pre-school children in academic classes for these reasons.

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