IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do.

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Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do.

- How far do you agree?

- What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

273 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people believe that workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are not valued enough and should be paid more, while film actors and company bosses earn too much money compared with the importance of their work. I strongly agree with this opinion.

Firstly, nurses, doctors and teachers do very important jobs for society. Doctors and nurses save people's lives and take care of sick people every day, often working long hours and at night. Teachers educate the next generation and help children to become good citizens. Without these workers, society could not work well. However, in many countries, nurses and teachers earn quite low salaries. For example, many teachers in my country have to do extra jobs because their salary is not enough.

In contrast, some film actors and company bosses earn millions of dollars every year. Actors entertain people, which is nice, but their work is not as important as saving lives or educating children. Some company bosses earn hundreds of times more than their normal workers, which is not fair.

I think several criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid. Firstly, the importance of the job to society should be considered. Secondly, the level of education and training needed is important. For example, doctors study for many years, so they should be paid well. Thirdly, the level of responsibility and difficulty of the job should be considered, such as working long hours or in dangerous conditions.

In conclusion, I agree that nurses, doctors and teachers should be paid more. Salaries should be decided by the importance of the job, the training required and the level of responsibility.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

287 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

It is often argued that essential workers such as nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued, while film actors and company executives receive salaries far greater than the social value of their work justifies. I largely agree with this view, although I believe the issue is more complex than it first appears.

There is a strong case that many essential workers are underpaid. Nurses and teachers perform work that is vital to society, protecting public health and educating future generations, yet in many countries their salaries are modest, and they often face heavy workloads and stressful conditions. The Covid-19 pandemic highlighted how dependent societies are on healthcare workers, many of whom risked their own health for relatively low pay. Meanwhile, top actors and chief executives can earn millions, sometimes hundreds of times more than average workers. Such huge disparities are difficult to justify in terms of contribution to society.

However, it should be noted that pay is largely determined by market forces. Actors and executives generate enormous revenue for film studios and companies, and their skills are rare, which explains their high earnings. In addition, doctors in many countries are, in fact, well paid, reflecting their long training.

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