IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: People who have original ideas are of much greater value to society than

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People who have original ideas are of much greater value to society than
those who are simply able to copy the ideas of others well.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

287 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people believe that people with original ideas are much more valuable to society than people who are good at copying other people's ideas. I partly agree with this statement, because original thinkers are very important, but people who can copy and use ideas well are also necessary.

On the one hand, people with original ideas are very valuable. They create new inventions, new theories and new works of art, which change the world. For example, Thomas Edison invented the light bulb, and Steve Jobs created new products such as the iPhone, which changed the way people live and communicate. Without original thinkers, there would be no progress in science, technology and culture. Original ideas also help companies and countries to be successful, because they can make new products that nobody else has.

On the other hand, people who can copy ideas well are also important. An idea is not useful if it is not used and spread. Many people are good at taking an idea and making it better, cheaper or more practical. For example, after the first cars were invented, other companies copied the idea and improved it, so that millions of people could buy cars. In addition, most jobs in society, such as doctors, teachers, engineers and builders, do not need completely new ideas. These people use knowledge and methods that were created by others, but they do their work very well, and society cannot function without them.

In my opinion, original thinkers are important for progress, but people who copy and apply ideas are important for making these ideas useful for everyone.

In conclusion, I partly agree with the statement. Both types of people are valuable to society, and they need each other.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

300 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

It is sometimes argued that people with original ideas contribute far more to society than those who are merely good at copying the ideas of others. While I agree that original thinkers play a crucial role in driving progress, I believe this statement underestimates the value of those who adopt, refine and spread existing ideas.

There is no doubt that original thinkers are extremely valuable. Major advances in science, technology and the arts have generally come from individuals who were able to see the world in new ways. Discoveries such as penicillin, the theory of relativity or the World Wide Web transformed human life, and they would not have been possible without people willing to challenge conventional thinking. Original ideas are also essential for economic competitiveness, since companies and countries that innovate are able to create new industries and jobs.

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