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Some people believe that computers are more a hindrance than a help in
today's world. Others feel that they are such indispensable tools that they
would not be able to live or work without them.

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

299 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Computers are used everywhere in today's world. Some people think that computers cause more problems than they solve, while others believe that computers are so important that they could not live or work without them. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion.

On the one hand, some people believe that computers are more a hindrance than a help. Firstly, many people spend too much time on computers, playing games, watching videos or using social media, so they waste time and become less productive. Secondly, using computers for many hours can cause health problems, such as eye problems, back pain and lack of exercise. Thirdly, computers can cause serious problems when they break down or when hackers attack them. For example, if a company's computer system stops working, the employees cannot do their work. Moreover, people's personal information can be stolen online.

On the other hand, many people think computers are necessary in modern life. Computers help us to work faster and more accurately. For example, banks, hospitals, airports and offices use computers to store information and do calculations that would take people a very long time. Computers also make communication easier, because we can send emails and have video calls with people all over the world. In addition, students can use computers to find information and study online, and many people can work from home.

In my opinion, computers are much more a help than a hindrance. The problems with computers are caused by the way people use them, not by the computers themselves. If people use computers sensibly, they can improve their lives and work.

In conclusion, although computers can cause some problems, I believe that they are indispensable tools in today's world, and most people could not live or work without them.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

308 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Computers have become central to almost every aspect of modern life. While some people argue that they create more problems than they solve, others regard them as so essential that they could not imagine living or working without them. In my view, although computers bring certain drawbacks, they are overwhelmingly a help rather than a hindrance.

Those who see computers as a hindrance raise several valid concerns. Firstly, computers can be a major source of distraction, as social media, online games and endless entertainment reduce productivity and concentration. Secondly, prolonged computer use has been linked to health problems, including eye strain, back pain and a sedentary lifestyle. Thirdly, our dependence on computers makes us vulnerable: when systems fail or are attacked by hackers, businesses, hospitals and even governments can be paralysed, and sensitive personal data may be stolen. Some also argue that computers have reduced face-to-face interaction and weakened skills such as handwriting and mental arithmetic.

On the other hand, the benefits of computers are enormous. They allow us to process vast amounts of information quickly and accurately, which is essential in fields such as medicine, banking, engineering and scientific research. Computers have also transformed communication, enabling people to stay in touch instantly with others around the world and to collaborate on projects regardless of location. In education, they provide access to a huge range of resources and online courses, while remote working, made possible by computers, has given many people greater flexibility. During the recent pandemic, computers allowed much of society to continue functioning.

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