IELTS Writing Task 2 · Advantages & Disadvantages

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: People have different job expectations for jobs.

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Đề bài

People have different job expectations for jobs. Some people prefer to do the same job for the same company, whereas others prefer to change jobs frequently.

Write about the advantages and disadvantages of each viewpoint?

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Đề hỏi lợi và hại của một hiện tượng, hoặc lợi có lớn hơn hại không (Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?). Với dạng "outweigh" bắt buộc nêu bên nào nặng hơn.

  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + nêu bên nào lớn hơn (nếu đề hỏi outweigh).
  2. Thân bài 1Các lợi ích (hoặc mặt yếu hơn), có giải thích.
  3. Thân bài 2Các bất lợi (hoặc mặt mạnh hơn), có giải thích và ví dụ.
  4. Kết bàiKhẳng định lại đánh giá của bạn.
  • Đoạn bên bạn cho là nặng hơn nên viết sau và kỹ hơn.
  • Tránh liệt kê quá nhiều ý, 2 ý mỗi bên phát triển sâu là đủ.
  • Từ nối: One major benefit…, A significant drawback…

Bài mẫu band 6.0

305 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

People have different expectations about their jobs. Some people like to stay in the same job at the same company for a long time, while others prefer to change jobs often. Both choices have advantages and disadvantages, which I will discuss in this essay.

Staying in the same job for a long time has several advantages. Firstly, it gives people job security and a stable income, so they can plan their future, for example, buying a house or raising children. Secondly, people who work for the same company for many years often get promoted to higher positions, because the company trusts them and they know the business very well. Thirdly, they can build good relationships with their colleagues and managers. However, there are also disadvantages. People who do the same job for many years may feel bored and lose their motivation. They may also not learn new skills, so if they lose their job, it can be difficult for them to find a new one.

On the other hand, changing jobs frequently also has advantages and disadvantages. The main advantage is that people can gain a lot of different experience and learn many new skills. They can also meet many people and build a large network of contacts. Moreover, changing jobs is often a good way to get a higher salary. However, people who change jobs too often may not have job security. Employers may think that they are not loyal or reliable, so they may not want to hire them. In addition, every time they start a new job, they have to learn a lot of new things and get used to a new environment, which can be stressful.

In conclusion, both staying in one job and changing jobs often have advantages and disadvantages. People should choose based on their personality, goals and situation.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

293 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

People have different expectations of their working lives. While some prefer to remain in the same job with the same employer for many years, others choose to change jobs frequently. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of each approach.

Remaining with one company offers a number of benefits. The most important is stability: long-term employees typically enjoy secure incomes and benefits such as pensions and health insurance, which allow them to plan for major life events like buying a home or starting a family. Loyalty is also often rewarded with promotion, as experienced employees develop a deep understanding of the company's operations and earn the trust of management. In addition, they can build strong relationships with colleagues, creating a supportive working environment. However, this path has drawbacks. Doing the same job for many years can become monotonous, leading to a loss of motivation. Moreover, employees who stay in one role may fail to develop new skills, leaving them vulnerable if they are made redundant in a changing job market.

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