IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world.

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Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

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Today, international tourism is one of the biggest industries in the world. Some people believe that it causes tension between people from different cultures instead of helping them to understand each other. I disagree with this opinion, although I accept that tourism can sometimes cause problems.

On the one hand, international tourism can sometimes create tension. Some tourists do not respect local customs and traditions. For example, they may wear inappropriate clothes when visiting temples, make a lot of noise or drink too much alcohol in public. This can make local people angry. In addition, in some popular tourist places, there are too many tourists, which causes traffic jams, pollution and higher prices for local people. For example, in some European cities, residents have protested against tourists because rents have become too expensive. Some local people also feel that their culture is being changed to entertain tourists.

On the other hand, I believe that tourism mostly helps people from different cultures to understand each other. When people travel to other countries, they can see how people live, try local food, learn about history and talk to local people. This helps them to understand and respect other cultures and to change their wrong ideas or stereotypes. For example, many people who visit Vietnam are surprised by how friendly the people are. Similarly, local people can also learn about other cultures by meeting tourists. Moreover, tourism brings money and jobs to local communities, which can improve relationships.

In my opinion, the problems caused by tourism can be solved if tourists learn about local customs before they travel and governments manage tourism carefully.

In conclusion, although international tourism can sometimes cause tension, I believe it mainly helps people from different cultures to understand each other.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

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International tourism has become one of the largest industries in the world, and some people claim that it creates tension rather than understanding between different cultures. Although I accept that tourism can cause conflict in certain situations, I largely disagree with this view, as I believe its overall effect is to promote cultural understanding.

It is true that tourism can sometimes lead to tension. Some visitors behave disrespectfully, ignoring local dress codes, religious customs or social norms, which can offend residents. In popular destinations, mass tourism can also cause overcrowding, pollution and rising property prices, making life more difficult for local people. In recent years, residents of cities such as Barcelona and Venice have protested against the impact of tourism on their communities. In addition, some critics argue that tourism encourages the commercialisation of culture, with traditional ceremonies and crafts being performed or produced mainly for tourists, which can create resentment.

However, I believe that these problems are outweighed by the positive effects of tourism on cross-cultural understanding. Travelling allows people to experience other cultures directly, by tasting local food, visiting historical sites and interacting with local people. Such experiences often challenge stereotypes and prejudices that people may have formed through the media. Similarly, host communities gain exposure to visitors from different backgrounds, which can broaden their perspectives. Tourism also provides income and employment, which gives local people an incentive to preserve their cultural heritage and welcome visitors.

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