IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Parents or other adult relatives should make important decisions for their (15

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Đề bài

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Parents or other adult relatives should make important decisions for their (15
to 18 year-old) teenage children.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

308 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people believe that parents or other adult relatives should make important decisions for teenagers aged between 15 and 18. I disagree with this statement. I think parents should give advice to their teenage children, but teenagers should be allowed to make their own important decisions.

On the one hand, there are some reasons why parents should make decisions for teenagers. Firstly, parents have more life experience, so they can see problems that teenagers cannot see. For example, a teenager may want to leave school to earn money, but parents know that education is very important for the future. Secondly, teenagers sometimes make decisions based on their feelings or because of pressure from their friends, rather than thinking carefully. Thirdly, parents usually pay for their children's education and living costs, so they think they should have the right to decide.

On the other hand, I believe that teenagers should make their own important decisions. Firstly, teenagers aged 15 to 18 are almost adults, and they need to learn how to make decisions and take responsibility for them. If parents always decide for them, they will not be able to make good decisions when they grow up. Secondly, some decisions, such as choosing a university major or a career, affect the teenager's whole life, so they should choose what they are interested in. For example, my friend's parents made him study economics, but he was not interested in it and later changed to music, which he loved. Thirdly, when teenagers make their own decisions, they become more confident and motivated.

In my opinion, parents should talk with their teenage children, give them advice and help them to understand the advantages and disadvantages of each choice, but the final decision should be made by the teenagers.

In conclusion, I disagree that parents should make important decisions for their teenage children.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

327 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Some people believe that parents or other adult relatives should make important decisions on behalf of teenagers aged 15 to 18. Although I agree that adults should play an important advisory role, I disagree that they should make major decisions for teenagers, who need to develop the ability to take responsibility for their own lives.

There are understandable reasons for wanting parents to make decisions for their teenage children. Adults have far more life experience and are often better able to foresee the long-term consequences of a decision. Teenagers, on the other hand, may act impulsively, be influenced by their friends or prioritise short-term enjoyment over long-term goals. For instance, a sixteen-year-old might want to leave school to take a job without realising how this could limit future career options. In addition, since parents are usually financially responsible for their children, they may feel entitled to make decisions about matters such as education.

However, I believe that allowing teenagers to make important decisions is essential for their development. Between the ages of 15 and 18, young people are preparing for adulthood, and they must learn how to weigh options, consider consequences and accept responsibility for their choices. If parents make all their decisions, teenagers may become overly dependent and struggle to cope when they leave home. Moreover, decisions such as choosing a subject to study at university or a future career will shape a teenager's entire life, so it is important that they reflect the young person's own interests and abilities. Teenagers who are forced to follow paths chosen by their parents are often unhappy and unmotivated. I know several people who studied subjects chosen by their parents and later abandoned them.

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